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-Prinky-

@-Prinky-

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#61

Just Amazing!!!!!!! Amazing!!!!!!!

It was sad one but such a superb creation, u know ur writing is sooo much nice & every emotion, every pain is visible there... too much talented u r !!!!!!!! 👏

I feel like i was watching that scene in show, speechless dear...

Thank u so much for pm

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Monica

@mochhug

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#62

Originally posted by: skavya
Just Amazing!!!!!!! Amazing!!!!!!!

It was sad one but such a superb creation, u know ur writing is sooo much nice & every emotion, every pain is visible there... too much talented u r !!!!!!!! 👏

I feel like i was watching that scene in show, speechless dear...

Thank u so much for pm

AWW thank you!!! 😳

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Srija C. Burman

@Madame_Noddy

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#63

Brilliant OS!! But you made me upset again!!! wyyyaaaiinnn😭😭

Cutting my drama😛, how on earth do you write so well??

You express the characters' thoughts and feelings so beautifully! Loved this! But i'm still sad though😭

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-Everglow-

@-Everglow-

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#64

really a heart-warming story...ending was sad but the story is really awesome and thanxx for the pm...

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princess_nabz

@princess_nabz

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#65

i loved it...

u pictured and wrote the emotion so well...it had me in almost tears...

u r an amzing writer

~bella

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Mishti

@.LilGreenRobot.

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#66

I have nothing to say to you except thanks for making me sad 😔

it was a wonderfully written piece of work.. absolutely superb and made me feel extremely sad 😭

not a lot of people can literally make me feel sad or cry because of a piece of writing.. so t his means that you are an exceptional writer 😃

as usual I loved this story as well 👏

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Blaaaaaaah

@-Bleeeh-

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#67

Sad but beautifully written :D

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@metoyou

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#68

Uff..kitna dard doge humein...? It was really very touching and sad. The scene in the show was very much needed but your version of it is equally beautiful.

I know, I know I am a bit behind track with your stories but dheere dheere I am getting there 😉

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MrMrsAsyaKhan

@MrMrsAsyaKhan

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#69

OMG Why do you make me cry so much? This was heartbreaking. And that dream, totally shattered my heart into tiny little pieces. If only, at first I really wanted him to believe her but then thought he's an idiot. He's blinded by his chudail BFF! You've written this beautifully, my loves. Idk how you actually put that scene into words, it was amazing. Great job! Loved ittt! <3