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Monica

@mochhug

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#51

Originally posted by: -KSGsmitten-
Really well written! I'm close to tears.

Aww thanks 😳😊

Originally posted by: jazsidhu
hey tis is really beautifully written...
was having tears edi...
thx fr the pm...

Aww thanks hun! 😳

Originally posted by: Kurup
Wowww...Mona darling...as far as the literacy work is considered...as usual like all ur works this was also beautiful, but when it comes to the plot, cant accept this fact that these two love birds are in such pain and are going away from each other...

Raabart! Tumhe compliments dehna nahin aata hai! 😆 I'm always blushing when I read your comments 😳 Thanks! Aww I know it's sad, but I warned you 😛

Originally posted by: Linsie
Nice...❤️

Thanks! 😛

Originally posted by: Asya_Maaneet
Monica! This was beautiful! Sad but beautiful! That seems to be the only word I can find to describe this OS! Idk how you do it. But you get to the heart of what I wish would happen and then you bring me back to the reality like that! 😭 I loved this OS, so (here it comes again) it was BEAUTIFUL yaar! 👍🏼 Great job! 👏 😛

Awww thanks hun! (btw what's YOUR name 😆). Aww really? You're so sweet! Glad I you liked it so much 😳😳

Originally posted by: Sumu4JayD
Did it enddd??
Oh! I am stil visualizing the whole thing!!
Beautiful portrayal!!
Thumbs up!! (Y)

Thanks!!! 😃😃

Originally posted by: Pori
Beautiful
I love the way you sketched their pain, faith, love and hope
you're an amazing writer

Aww thanks! 😳

Originally posted by: madhvi4gurti
im crying after reading this!!!😭
even i feel something like that only is gonna happen on monday!!!
u wrote it so fabulously...totally loved it! it was heart wrenching!😭

Aww Yeah I feel a variation will happen tomorrow, too. 😭 But I wanted to add a small glimer of hope to it. Though it's still ultimately sad. But I'm still hoping this is Zoya's plan to throw Tanveer off and make her let her guard down. 😃

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SakeenaSidd

@SakeenaSidd

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#52

Monica...I was warned...but I read it anyway :(

It's too sad...I can't take it :(

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Monica

@mochhug

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#53

Originally posted by: SakeenaSidd
Monica...I was warned...but I read it anyway :(

It's too sad...I can't take it :(

Aww see this is why I warned you! 😳. Maybe I should put a second warning, not for those faint of heart 😆.

Well I might do another OS soon (next week sometime) and an update for the FF so stay tuned! 😃

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Dee

@Enchantress

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#54

Loved it so very much. I am sure this gonna happen tomorrow. But, I want you to continue this. Would love to read more of it.

Dee

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Monica

@mochhug

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#55

Originally posted by: Enchantress
Loved it so very much. I am sure this gonna happen tomorrow. But, I want you to continue this. Would love to read more of it.

Dee

Aww I'm glad you loved it 😃 But I don't think I can continue it hun. I really wouldn't know how. 😛