AsYa OS: What If I Told You... - Page 3

I hope the dream part happens in real in the show.

For that we have to wait till tomorrow.

Thanx for the pm. Take care.

loved it...

thnx for pm...

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Morning, ma'am! Agent Jazz, reporting. Late again. I hope I'm not fired or anything.

First of all, why all the warnings and apologies? It was beautiful and spellbounding, albeit a little sad and painful. But let's be real, life isn't all about glitter and rainbows. Heatbreak comes in many forms; all forms are equally painful. And Zoya's belief that Asad wouldn't trust her... So justified, yet so misplaced. At this point, he would have trusted her, had she presented her case. But I don't blame her though. After all that she has been through, it's only expected. I'm okay with sad endings, you know I am. But damn you Monica for that dream. It made me soo happy and I thought you were just trolling us with the warning. On second thoughts though, I forgive you. Because the beauty and the eloquence of your words more than made up for it.

I still can't get over the fact that the entire piece was literally a 3 minute scene, max. The depth of all the emotions you portrayed literally had me analyzing AsYa's entire love life post Tannu's entrance.

There's a line I read somewhere and I love it. Khata ki lamhe ne, saza paayi sadiyon ne. It's so apt right now. Because despite the fact that this misunderstanding will clear out in a matter of weeks and there really was no khata, to AsYa, their separation has run the course of a century already. My heart goes out to them. To Zoe, her dream is just that... A castle in thin air. Oh how I wish she would realize just how much Asad has changed. But I guess all phases need to run their course. This is just as important of a step and you portrayed it beautifully. My poor babies... they are both on the verge of a self-detonating explosion.

Again, how sad the writing was doesn't change its sheer beauty. And I hope you realize that.

A masterpiece, no less. Thank you.

Aww thanks! Yeah as much as I love reading in first person, I'm not great at writing it. I always end up going back to omniscient haha

Haha true. Hmm Ok I'll give it a shot