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Posted: 12 years ago
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Loved it !!!!!!
Pls continue soon n do pm me whenever u update next !!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Part 3:-

asad:-are you okay.
zoya:-ya ALLAH do i look okay.
she turned her face and arrange her hairs and when she was going to start a fight with asad she stopped, asad was shoked to see her and wispered zoya while najma jumped with excitement asad stand up and gave her his hand but she refused then the guy who was with zoya helped her and when zoya stand up...
guy with zoya:-zoe tum theek ho?
zoya:-ya ramiz i m fine.
najma came closer to her and hugged her
najma:-zoya, kaise hai ap?
zoya:-najma mai theek hun.
they break the hug
najma:-ap...ap bhopal kab aye or mujhe bataya kyun nahe?
zoya:-bus kal he aen hun or sorry tumhe batana bhol gaye
najma noticed that guy and asked
najma:-zoya apke sath ye larka kon hai?
zoya:-oh ye...sorry mai introduce karwana bhol gaye, ye ramiz he mera fiance hai Ramiz or ramiz ye hai najma mere beeest friend.
it pained, it pained asad alot
ramiz:-oh to ap haina najma, miss tamatar, bht suna hai apke bara mai maina.
they shaked hand, ramiz pointed asad
ramiz:-waise zoe najma se to mila diya tumne mujhe lakin ye kon hain?
zoya:-ye Mr.Khan hai najma k bara bhai.
ramiz:-oh ap asad hain. nice to meet you young man
he moved to asad and hugged him, asad hugged him back
ramiz:-bht suna hai tumhare bare mai. mere zoe ki bht help ki the tumne last time jab wo india aye the
asad with heavy voice:- pehle bhe ke the or hamesha karunga
ramiz:-no ways ab zarorat nahe kyun k pehle ye akale the lakin ab mai ink sath hun.
asad can't take it anymore, he was going when najma stopped him.
najma:-bhaijan kahan ja raha hain ap?
asad:-najma rohail intezar kar raha hai humara ab agar tum yahan busy ho to mjhe uske pass jana hoga.
najma:-oh han rohail, rukiya mai bhe apke sath chalte hun, she then turned to zoya zoya aj raat ap or ramiz humara ghar dinner par ayenga or mai koi x cuse nahe sunuge filhal mujhe jana hai rohail wait kar raha hoga...bye raat ko milta hain...
they both went from there...zoya was disturbed ramiz starts talking to her but she was not responding
zoya(to herself):-ye rohail kon hai...najma kiski bat kar rahe the...mujhe kiya...

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part 3a end
sorry for a short update but i have to go and i will update part b soon
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Edited by asyaarshilover - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nyc updt. Plz make it little longer 4m nxt time. Cnt soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice part continue soon
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Nice update !
Waiting for the next part !
Pls continue soon!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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i would love a pm for the next part.. amazing story
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Posted: 12 years ago
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loved the update but it is 2 short
Edited by kritz4ever - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hey is is superb...amazing...totally luv it...
both of them meet each other...
thx fr the pm n please pm me for the next part...
great update...
please continue soon n eagerly waiting for the next part...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Poor Asad... he trusted his best friend n ended up losing his love... now he had to see her with another man... he is so broken... seeing indifference in Zoya's eyes is killing him... n thinking about it he brought it all on himself... just one wrong decision n he loses everything...
Will Zoya know who Rohail is? I mean will she know he is Tanveer's son? Or will she believe Asad n Tanveer consummated their marriage?? (Yucks!!)
Update soon... I am so eager to know...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Part 4:-

khan mansion, at night
najma, zoya nai kuch bataya tha k wo kitne bje tak ayege?
dilshaad was little loud when she was coming down stairs, she asked this question to najma, najma replied
najma:-nahe ami, magar ap fikar mat karain, wo zaroor ayenge.
suddenly asad came out from his room, dilshaad moved towards asad with a tense expression
dilshaad:-kya kaha ayaan nai, rohail ziada pareshan to nahe kar raha hai?
asad:-ami thora tang kar raha hai lakin ayaan nai kaha hai k wo kal tak handle kar lega.
dilshaad:-chalo acha hai lakin asad ye jo tum zoya se rohail ki sachai chupana cha raha hona wo kam nahe ayega, tum dekhna zoya bht jald sachai se bakhabar hoge.
asad was going to say something but then the doorbell rang, najma and dilshaad were excited, shayad zoya hoge, najma jao darwaza kholo. dilshaad said to najma ji ami najma replied...she walked towards the door and open it, she was so happy to see her
najma:-ami, jaldi ayen zoya agaen hain.
she called dilshaad, the two also reached to the door, zoya and ramiz were standing outside holding hand which was noticed by asad, he feels little uncomfortable, dilshaad annd najma hugged zoya, zoya and ramiz were now in the house...ramiz to dilshaad introducing him
ramiz:-hello aunty...mai ramiz, i know ap mjhse pehle bar mil rahe hain to maine khd introduce kar diya apne apko warna ap sochna lagte k mai kn hun...he winked and the three ladies laughed...asad was still silent...they did some formal convo's...dilshaad was feeling tht zoya is tense but she did'nt ask her and then they started dinner, on the dinning table asad, dilshaad and najma sitted on there formal places while zoya and ramiz seated on the empty chairs...asad was staring zoya again & again but zoya was ignoring him...dilshaad noticed it while ramiz was busy with his funny talks with najma.
after dinner they all settled on the couch
dilshaad to ramiz:-ramiz, tum karte kiya ho?
zoya replied:-wo phoppi ramiz apne abu ka buisness handle karta hai...
najma:-waise zoya apne ab tak bataya nahe k ap india aye to apna huma bataya kyun nahe k tum india aoge???
zoya:-ara tamatar bataya to bhol gaye the bht achanak plan banaya tha ramiz nai...
dilshaad:-jao najma sab k liye coffee la ao. najma left waise zoya tum india aye kyun ho wo bhe aesa achanak.
zoya with a tense face:-wo phoppi ma...ramiz intrupted
ramiz:-kya zoe humara plan to 2 weeks se bana hua tha india ana ka.
dilshaad:-oho, mjhe kuch bat samajh a rhe hai...zoya ab mjhe saaf saaf batao k bat kiya hai...jab se ae ho kuch pareshaan lag rahe ho.
zoya:-aese koi b...ramiz intrupted again
ramiz tension ki baat to hai.
zoya whispered in his ears to keep silent, but dilshaad asked him
dilshaad:-zoya ab tum khamosh rahoge, beta ramiz plz mjhe batao k akhir bat kiya hai?
ramiz:-aunty baat ye hai k mera or zoya ka nikah ki date 2 mahena baad ki fix hue hai or nikah newyork maihe hoga, lakin mere nani india mai hain to unho nai nikah tak k liye huma india bula liya hai.
dilshaad:-ismai pareshani ki bat kiya hai?
ramiz:-asal bat ye hai k nani bht purana khayalat ki hai or unke hisab se mai or zoya nikah se pehle ek ghar mai nahe reh sakte or isliye unho kaha tha k mjhe aj raat tak apne liye koi ghar taalash karna hoga QK zoe ko to akala rakh nahe sakta, nani to ek raat tak k liye huma ek sath nahe rakh sakte.
dilshaad:-agar aese baat hai to zoya...tum humara sath reh lo?
ramiz:-par aunty...dilshaad intrupted
dilshaad:-dekho beta tumhare nani tum dono ko ek ghar mai nahe rakh sakte lakin zoya humara sath to reh sakte hai, wo huma jante bhe hai to kise ko koi problem bhe nahe hoge.
ramiz with a smile:-ya aunty you are right...mai kal he zoe ko uska laguage k sath yahan drop kardunga.
najma from back:-kal kyun zoya to aj sahe yahan rukh sakte hai? kyun ami.
zoya:-lekin tamatar mere pass raat ko pehenna tak k kapra bhe nahe hain. mai kaise?
najma:-ara ap mere sath chala.
they all went to zoya's room but asad was still there, he was there in the whole conversation but still he was not there...
they all entered in the room
najma:-zoya jakar wo cupboard khola.
zoya moved and open it...she was shocked because her clothes were still in that cupboard.
zoya:-phoppi ye to mera saman hai...jo mai 3 saal pehle chor kar gaye the.
dilshaad:-han zoya...mere khayal se ab tum yahan ruk sakte ho.
ramiz:-ya sure...zoe yahen raha ge...it's decided
all were waiting for zoya's answere.
zoya:-agar ap sabne decide kar liya hai to phir mai kya kehsakte hun.
they all were happy...when they came out from her room to see off ramiz...zoya noticed asad was talking to someone on phone.
asad to ayaan:-ayaan rohail ziada tang to nahe kar raha?
ayaan:-nahe bhaijan filhal to nahe.
asad:-theek hai.
he disconnect the call and also came near to say bye to ramiz then ramiz left, the 4 also went to their respective rooms.

zoya's room:-
zoya was moving in the room
zoya(to herself):-Mr.Khan phir kise rohail k bara mai baat kar raha the, akhir ye rohail hai kon?

precap:-zoya meet rohail and came to know about his identity

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finish i hope you liked it
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Edited by asyaarshilover - 12 years ago

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