SS 'after three years'last part 7 page 28

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Posted: 12 years ago
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guyz i m working on my new OS "after three years"
will post it soon

in my story tanveer will give birth to a boy and after that she will die and then story will take 3 years leap and two new entry first "ramiz" zoya's mangatar and second "rohail" tanveer's son
please let me know should i post it or not
i am waiting for ur comments

P.S:-i got a lovely response from you all so turned it in a SS

part 1 = page 2
part 2 = page 6
part 3 = page 10
part 4 = page 12
part 5 = page 16
part 6 = page 22
part 7 = page 28
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asyaarshilover thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awww😭
no comment
i think i should keep my idea to myself
shweta_yadav thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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conitune it ...it good that we r not going tolrate that billi here😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: shweta_yadav

conitune it ...it good that we r not going tolrate that billi here😊


hmmm
i will post it at night and yaa u will not tolerate tanveer except in the starting
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice but the tanveer part wld be only problem lol..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: asyaarshilover


hmmm
i will post it at night and yaa u will not tolerate tanveer except in the starting


i dn't mind it ...if she is in the starting
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Post it post it! Somethign different! Sounds interesting šŸ‘
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Posted: 12 years ago
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billi will die,yipeee.plz continue nd pm me
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Posted: 12 years ago
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but please show Asad knows tanveer's truth before she died
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Posted: 12 years ago
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i am to make it a SS
so here is part 1...i know it's little boring but hope you all will tolelrate it

Part 1:-

they all rushes to the hospital, tanveer's condition was getting worse in every single second, doctor took her to the operation theatare,it had been almost 2 hours past since they were waiting for the doctor to come out, asad was standing far from dilshaad and najma near a window and was in his thoughts, he was totally numb because he can't understand that what is actually happenning with him, dilshaad can't see him like this so she came closer to him, she putted her hand on his shoulder.
dilshaad:-mai jante hun k tum kiya soch raha ho.
asad(wiping his tears):-nahe ami. mai kuch nahe soch raha...mai to bus tanveer k liye thora pareshan hun.
dilshaad:-jhoot...tum wohi soch raha ho jo mai or najma soch raha hai, yahe k tumhara or tanveer k nikah ko sirf 4 months guzra hain or tanveer ki delievery abhe kaisa hosakte hai.doctor k according tanveer 8 months pregnent hai or ye ek immature dilievery hai laken phir bhe is baat mai koi shak nahe k tanveer nai humse jhoot bola, abhe ye moka nahe laken mai usse pochunge,shayad yahe waja the k usna mujhe or najma ko tumhare sath london bheja or tabiyat ka bahana karka khud nahe aye.taka wo apne real condition humse chupasaka
suddenly doctor came out and move towards asad
doctor:-congratz Mr.Khan, beta hua hai.
asad was happy on the same time he was confussed but still he thanks doctor for saving the child. when doctor was again going inside he stopped him
asad:-doctor, apna bataya nahe k tanveer kaise hai?
doctor:-i m sorry par unka bara mai abhe kuch kaha nahe ja sakta lakin hum koshish kar sakta hain.
suddenly a nurse came out from opearation theature
nurse:-doctor jaldi andar ayen, patient is sinking.
they ran inside and then he came out after 1o minutes
doctor:-dekhain Mr.Khan apke wife k pass waqt bohat kam ha or wo kabse apsa milna k liye keh rahe hain.
asad ran inside and sat beside tanveer, tanveer holds his hand, she removed oxygen mask from her mouth she was taking longs breathes, asad was in shock to see her like this.
asad:-tannu...she intruppted
tanveer:-rukiya jammy! huma bolna dijea humara pass ziada waqt nahe...after a pause...insan ko uske galat kamon ki saza milte hai or huma bhe mile, humne he apko or zoya ko alag kiya, us raat...she paused again...us raat kuch nahe hua tha jammy or ye bacha bhe apka nahe lakin humse vaada karain k ap humara bura kamo ki saza humara bacha ko nahe dainga ap isa sambhalanga please humse vaada karain taka hum sukun se mar sakain.
asad controlling his anger and emotions:-vaada.
after listening that one word from asad tanveer smiled and took her last breath.
asad:-tannu par tumne aesa kyun kiya? asad turned his face on the opposite side and ask her but when he did'nt get a reply he turned towards her but it was too late...she is no more...asad was numb,speechless but still he shouted her name how loud he can he was
asad:-tanveer...utho tum aesa nahe ja sakte tumhe batana hoga k tumne aesa kyun kiya...uthu
he tried many times but it was a waste and he know that
he came out...he was broken into tears dilshaad consoled him
dilshaad:-sabar karo asad...ye ALLAH ki marzi hum kuch nahe karsakte.
asad:-par wo chali gaye ami pura sach bataye bagair chale gaye, akhir usne mere sath aesa kiya kyun? kyun mjhe zoya se dor kiya? usne mujhe saza di hai us par yakeen karna ki saza...
he cried...he cried alot that day and many other days

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