FF: Through The Monsoon #1 - Link to #2 on pg 1 - Page 26

Originally posted by: webuser7

I just read parts 6 and 7 and you left me wanting for more! Great updates! Loved how Asad teased Zoya about his password. BTW, are you inspired by Gul?! That was such a teaser. I expected it to be "musibat" or "NYHoityToity" or something related to Zoya. But it was in character for it to be related to Dilshad and Najma! So good job! 👏

Loved the pizza eating scene and the last lip smacking! Raat khatam? No way! Is raat ki subaah nahin! 😉 😆

Waiting for the next part! 👍🏼 👍🏼

Originally posted by: friendsall

Read all parts in one go! such a nice romantic one n I am alws ur big fan, d way u write is awesome:)

Hope raat abhi baaki hein:)

Originally posted by: niyati789

This was so fun and especially the PIZZA PART ..!!!asad yahan bhi ladkiyon ki tarah sharmata hai🤣...

I wish ki koi mujhe bhi itne pyaar se pizza khilaye😳

Btw will we have a next part ??? Plzzz i really want to know wht will happen next 😊

If there will be a next part plzzz pm me ...😊

Originally posted by: lakshna

Wow just amazing... Like ur writing. Can't hlp reading it again n again. Plz update soon

Originally posted by: mochhug

Actually it was a chapter from an SS 😆 But sure here it is 😃

Pizza Feeding 😆

PATA NAHIN!!!? 😛😆 Waiting anxiously

Originally posted by: goingreen

Okay I just read it, it's really good!! (: But yeah it was vice versa in that version haha.

Originally posted by: mochhug

Lol yes. But like I said, I like yours better. You created an ambiance, and your writing makes me visualize it more 😳

plz continue soon. its a very nice story .

lovely update

i came across this ff and read in one go

and mostly asya scenes were soooper duper

do continue soon

and if u can plz add me to ur pm list