FF: Through The Monsoon #1 - Link to #2 on pg 1

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goingreen

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Posted: 12 years ago

#241

Originally posted by: -KSGsmitten-
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Thank god you updated!!
This is one of your best updates!! 👏👏👏 Loved it to bitsss!! This dinner scene goes straight to my QH wishlist!! You're the best writer ever!! I'm still in a trance!
Please update sooon! 😊

Aww thank you!! (: So kind of you to say so haha. I wish we get to see something like this in the show too man, it's the only reason I write stuff like this :p

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goingreen

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Posted: 12 years ago

#242

Originally posted by: anushreemishra
Wow lovely update...asya feeding each other hayeei am sure zoya ko aj tak pizza itna tasty ni laga hoga😉...i think raat abhi baki hai...am i right?update soon...waiting

Hahaha yeah, I'm sure Zoya's love for pizza must've grown ten fold now :p Glad you liked it!! (:

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goingreen

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Posted: 12 years ago

#243

Originally posted by: sgksg3
Hayye allah ..apple bechara left uneaten ...i know i know raat aise nahi khatm hone waala ..next part will be a pleasant surprise.

Hahahaha apple ko koi bhulta hi nahi :p

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goingreen

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Posted: 12 years ago

#244

Originally posted by: Linsie

Dinner's over, Asad left, raat khatam?? (: 🤣

ya right... update soon

Hahahaha oh man, am I that predictable?? :p

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goingreen

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Posted: 12 years ago

#245

Originally posted by: -KSGsmitten-
But what's next?? Is Zoya gonna eat that apple??

HAHA you commented again just to ask me about the apple!! Just wait and watch (:

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Monica

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Posted: 12 years ago

#246

Originally posted by: goingreen

Oh!! There's another OS with pizza-feeding?? Damn I have to read it, do you have the link? Nightmare ka mujhe pata nahi :p

Actually it was a chapter from an SS 😆 But sure here it is 😃

Pizza Feeding 😆

PATA NAHIN!!!? 😛😆 Waiting anxiously

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goingreen

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Posted: 12 years ago

#247

Originally posted by: zoas91
( The last bit went into Asad's mouth, his tongue grazing her fingers ever so slightly. Zoya used that her thumb to brush the side of Asad's lip and wipe off a little sauce that was there. She placed that thumb in her mouth and sucked on it lightly, as Asad watched her closely)

you left me with butterflies in my stomach!!! woman this was hot! its like foreplay to a heated night! i am looking forward to the next update!!! and plzzz no raat khatam...let this raat go forever☺️. plz plz plz pm me when you update!

Hahaha I didn't realize it came out as hot until I posted it. I was going for sweet but I guess I failed, not that I'm complaining either :p Glad you liked it!! (:

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Nida

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Posted: 12 years ago

#248

Hey ...
Awww !!! This was so good ... :D
I loved this update to bits ... ;)

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goingreen

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Posted: 12 years ago

#249

Originally posted by: me2you
One word: CONTINUE!
I just read all the chapters in one go and I am already loving it.
Those sweet, nice, little, awkward but yet lovable moments between them are the soul of your story. Wanna read more and more.
You don't PM right? Well, then I will just add you as a buddy 😉

Yeah I don't PM haha. Glad you liked it!! (: And yup, I thrive on writing moments like these (:

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goingreen

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Posted: 12 years ago

#250

Originally posted by: rutu83
oof asad and his shyness
his love feeding him pizza on the sofa in the light of flickering candle during a blackout, and he LEAVES!!
looking forward to the next part because raat baaakiii

Oh yay you remembered the ambiance I had set earlier as you read the pizza scene!! Perfect, haha it was what I was going for (: Glad you liked it!! (:

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