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Jazlyn Lodhi

@Nutella.

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#81

Like I said in my other comment, I would quote your reply but that would be imprudent.

He's buried in the Church of the Holy Trinity in UK. Yes, I did look it up just in case I need it in the future... Who knows? Maybe my future boyfriend will be a Shakespeare fan and I can impress him with my immense knowledge. 😆 Titanic! My all time favorite movie! Yeah, that ending didn't go down too well so they ditched it. Besides the fact that the original just simply didn't call for an alternative ending, there were also legal complications because Titanic is a true story and they can't mess with it just to make people happy. Like no, sorry to say, life doesn't work that way.

YAY FOR MONICA BECAUSE SHE HAS GOTTEN SMARTER! Girl, you should be proud of all your works! You paint? Woah! Why do I not know about this? We have something in common!

WORD! I agree with every word you said! All I'm saying that that temporary pain and separation was necessary for the development of their relationship and kudos to you for portraying the emotions so skillfully!

I will always be a fan! 😳

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JeeLeZaraa

@JeeLeZaraa

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#82

very nice. Perfectly described every situation.

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Monica

@mochhug

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#83

Originally posted by: supreet_dmg
very nice. Perfectly described every situation.

Thank you! 😳

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Monica

@mochhug

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#84

Originally posted by: Saima-Syed
Beautifully written

Thanks 😛

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Monica

@mochhug

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#85

Originally posted by: 1D_D3-Crazy
that was really good :-) I loved how you expressed their feelings :D

Aww thanks! 😛

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Monica

@mochhug

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#86

Originally posted by: srashti_kul
heart touching

Thanks 😊

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Monica

@mochhug

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#87

Originally posted by: -Jazzy-
Like I said in my other comment, I would quote your reply but that would be imprudent.

Lol I just quoted that bit so you know I agree 😆
At school (night class, *sigh*) but will fully reply tonight or tomorrow :)

Edited: Ok So this was LONG overdue. 😆

You looked it up? OMG haha well you're right. It would be a good idea to know that. LMAO. Based on your taste in writing and reading, I'd say he HAS to know about Shakespeare, but only enough so that you can still impress him with your knowledge 😃.

Haha yes I'm smarter And about my painting, I kinda do. I did more in high school, and in my first year in uni. But lately not so much. Though I did do a protrait of my mom, that I'm pretty proud of. WAIT YOU PAINT!? OMG So now there's something I can compliment YOU on. 😃 I DEMAND you post pictures. I NEED to see your stuff. So I can smack you right back in head when you say "I don't know, it's not so good, blah blah blah" 😆

And as for the way I ended it, I made another story like that. But people are already asking for another part 😆 Not as many, since I made it clear I wouldn't, but still. It's nice, I guess.

Ok. Hope that made up for me totally neglecting this 😛

Edited by mochhug - 12 years ago

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Mamatha

@mamathasridhar

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#88

Thats awesome writing yaar, y dont u write an intense lovestory where the two soulmates meet i m sure it will be gr8

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Monica

@mochhug

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#89

Originally posted by: mamathasridhar
Thats awesome writing yaar, y dont u write an intense lovestory where the two soulmates meet i m sure it will be gr8

Awww you're so sweet! Already working on an FF atm, but I'll keep it mind for my next one 😉