AsYa OS: The Last Touch

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MissDiva

@MissDiva

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Posted: 12 years ago

#61

So heart touching... Very emotional...
Thanks for PM.

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Fuj

@-ElmoFuj-

Stunner

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Posted: 12 years ago

#62

Oh so heart wrenching! 😔

I love reading your works! You write so beautifully! The imagery you portrayed was beautiful. Asad's pain, his dialogues were FAB!

Awwweesome! 🤗

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Monica

@mochhug

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+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#63

Originally posted by: -ElmoFuj-
Oh so heart wrenching! 😔

I love reading your works! You write so beautifully! The imagery you portrayed was beautiful. Asad's pain, his dialogues were FAB!

Awwweesome! 🤗

AHH! I've been waiting your comment Faiza 😆 I'm glad you liked it 😃 Thaaank you 😳

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Mrinalini

@minakrish

Viewbie

+ 51

Posted: 12 years ago

#64

Awesome.. but Heart breaking! 🥺

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Revelio

@Revelio

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#65

Omg, that was awesome! But don't u dare stop there coz I wud be spending a lifetime thinking on a happy ending and then I'll go crazy and the rest is history. I nearly cried, u meanie. Now I'm begging u, plz plz plz write another part with a happy ending!

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Barayah

@irock321

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#66

Beautiful! Sad but loved this!

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Nida

@Gurmeet4Drashti

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#67

This was heartbreaking ... :( <\3

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Monica

@mochhug

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#68

Originally posted by: MrMrsAsyaKhan

No waaayy! Yesss you did make us cry but this a beautiful piece of work and you deserve all the praise coming your way! Awww, no worries if you don't want to but do write another OS sorta continuing this but a happy onee! It's upto you, I didn't want to continue mine either, atleast you ended yours beautifully. My one was abit abrupt and i don't think anyone understood the ending! Loool!
Ahh yess don't be too happy about that one i'm so bad with comments... But i loved it to the coreee! I've unres'd though nonetheless. I've been so lazy, i've not had the chance to read it as soon as you posted.

OH MY GOD I just realized. Yaadien! Yes that was beautiful! Lemme add to the pleas. PLEASE CONTINUE IT 😆 As for my continuation, I think I'll wait. I have an idea, but yeah it'll be a separate OS. The thing is, as much as I want Tanveer exposed... I don't know how to write it 😕 it's really hard to think of a unique way to do it. Plus I hate writing her in general LOL. That's why I've only mentioned her once or twice in my entire FF. But let's see. I might get inspired.

For your OS, I liked the ending. It just didn't seem like an ENDING. If you know what I mean.

BTW writing this comment I actually got inspired for another Three shot from today's episode 😆 I'm posting part 1 now. Lemme know if you think I should continue it 😃

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Monica

@mochhug

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#69

Originally posted by: x_Mishti_x
haven't you had enough of making me cry? First in the FF and now here?? 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭
I was hoping for some positive stuff in this.. I was already dancing that AsYa already met.. Thank God for that.. 😆
this was a beautifully written OS.. the only spoken words were from Asad and I absolutely loved the dialogues especially that "Jabse tum aaiho, mein sirf aur sirf apne iss kambhakat dil ki suntha hoon" beautiful dialogue 👏
yeah then the rest of the OS was filled with heart breaking, emotional, heart rending, poignant, gloomy, depressing, miserable, distressing, demoralizing, shattering, disheartening and God knows what other words that made me cry.. but nevertheless it was a wonderful story 😃

AWW I'm sowieee! But I'm doing a TS that exposes the cat 😆 Usually hate writing her at all. She's too infuriating to even think about. BUT people have asked me for continuations with that so I'm satisfying them with this instead. I'm hoping LOL.

Aww thanks hun! I'm really glad you liked it :) your comments always leave me blushing 😳😳 And I'm glad you liked that line 😃 I didn't want him to confess to her in that pained state 😭

But I'll make it up I promise 😉

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Monica

@mochhug

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#70

Originally posted by: Ilhamez
I think u made all of us cry
I was Like this 😭
And the last ZOYA bring a tears in my eye
I was laughing the whole day but now ur os remember me of asya
Heart touching os
I loved what someone Said , if ksg is the king of expressionss so u are a queen of how u describes them
Love u Monica love u so much
Tnks for the pm

AWW I didn't mean to make you sad 😭 but I'm really happy you liked it :) AND THANK YOU. That's really a huge compliment from both you and Kaya13 (who was the other person that said that )

P.S. What's you name :)