AsYa OS: The Last Touch - Page 7

Originally posted by: -ElmoFuj-

Oh so heart wrenching! 😔

I love reading your works! You write so beautifully! The imagery you portrayed was beautiful. Asad's pain, his dialogues were FAB!

Awwweesome! 🤗

Originally posted by: MrMrsAsyaKhan

No waaayy! Yesss you did make us cry but this a beautiful piece of work and you deserve all the praise coming your way! Awww, no worries if you don't want to but do write another OS sorta continuing this but a happy onee! It's upto you, I didn't want to continue mine either, atleast you ended yours beautifully. My one was abit abrupt and i don't think anyone understood the ending! Loool!
Ahh yess don't be too happy about that one i'm so bad with comments... But i loved it to the coreee! I've unres'd though nonetheless. I've been so lazy, i've not had the chance to read it as soon as you posted.

Originally posted by: x_Mishti_x

haven't you had enough of making me cry? First in the FF and now here?? 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭

I was hoping for some positive stuff in this.. I was already dancing that AsYa already met.. Thank God for that.. 😆

this was a beautifully written OS.. the only spoken words were from Asad and I absolutely loved the dialogues especially that "Jabse tum aaiho, mein sirf aur sirf apne iss kambhakat dil ki suntha hoon" beautiful dialogue 👏

yeah then the rest of the OS was filled with heart breaking, emotional, heart rending, poignant, gloomy, depressing, miserable, distressing, demoralizing, shattering, disheartening and God knows what other words that made me cry.. but nevertheless it was a wonderful story 😃

Originally posted by: Ilhamez

I think u made all of us cry
I was Like this 😭
And the last ZOYA bring a tears in my eye
I was laughing the whole day but now ur os remember me of asya
Heart touching os
I loved what someone Said , if ksg is the king of expressionss so u are a queen of how u describes them
Love u Monica love u so much
Tnks for the pm