ASYA Two Shot: Yeh Haldi (Part2/Page6) - Page 5

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Heya Sunshine,
This was so beautiful, sorry for a late comment but I was waiting for u complete it. this was fabulous. but u know my heart is bleeding right now, abhi da pain is so much after Q.
I wonder y dey left such a beautiful rasam from nikkah ceremony, oh wel I guess its for da time dey really get wed.
the part where Asad sneaked into her room n rubbed da haldi n den Zoe rubbing it back on his cheek was soo beautiful. okay so Asad had all planned out n informed Ayaan too, great for the rest of his life he'll be teased now. their confession was soo sweet n I am fida over Asad's line, asking her how more beautiful will she get, for him. oh I love dis guy soo much.
I hope he's back to his old self soon in the serial too, yea dat does mean being Akdu n loving Zoe.
please why do ask about writing for Nikkah, u shud do it soon, mayb dat will heal this wound a bit.
lots of love.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Such a sweet ending. Thank u for the PM
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Posted: 12 years ago
#43
simply awesome. .
know yesterday's epi your moral wld have been down...
but you kept the flow..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Lovely update...Loved their Romance & Confession...

Thnx for PM...
Mariam...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hey tis is really awesome...so beautifully writen...totally amazing...luv the najma n zoya conversation it just really great n hw asad was hiding n watching the whole function...the way najma help zoya to cover up about the whole haldi fiaso was great n the bond between zoya n najma is just awesome...totally luv the confession part between asad n zoya it was just so beautifull n romantic...totally n brilliantly written...thx fr the pm,,,it was just mind blowing...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hey
that was beautiful
loved Zoya and Najma's antics
and the confession was lovely
great job😊

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Posted: 12 years ago
#47
amazing this was so cute
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awww..so beautiful & sweet...😃
Posted: 12 years ago
#49
This is SOSOSOSOSOSO cuteee! 😳 Really, so very beautiful! 👏 Totally FANGIRLING. Love it! ❤️
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Posted: 12 years ago
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This was such a beautiful piece! Loved it ❤️

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