ASYA Two Shot: Yeh Haldi (Part2/Page6) - Page 3

tis is really beautiful...luv it,...so nicely written...luv the whole scene n wat asad did just to come n see zoa n put fr her haldi...both of them r just too cute...amazing update...thx f rthe pm n please pm me fr the next part...please continue soon n eagerly waiting fr the next part...

i wish asad would have said this

How dare you call this a failed attempt?! ALLAH MIYA THIS WAS A-M-A-Z-I-N-G! Mai kya Karoon? I wanna read it again but then I need to comment. Hayee my life is so difficult. Chalo pele comment katam karti hoon! So I thought the Asad in the show was cute but like the cuteness over here almost made me cry tears of joy. Wow I'm such a dramebaaz LOL. But I'm not lying! Why do you write so perfectly?! TELLL ME PLEASE! :P He closed the lights to come and meet her and put his ishq ka rang on her again. Like how much cuter can he get?! ZOYA IS SO RUBBING OFF ON HIM! He climbed through the window loool. Somehow you always make me love Zoya so much more. She would rather fight off the chor because she didn't wanna put the rest of the family in danger ( and bother Mr. Khans muscle of course) but OMG she knows karate! LOL IM SO GLAD YOU INCLUDED THAT! Wow I use caps too much! Anyways, I looove how she knew it was him as soon as she got his chest- well of course that chest and her are like best friends with the amount of times she falls! Haye the way you describe their subtle romance makes my dil go all happy!

When she was tracing his lips I was like oh dayum Zoya is getting flirty lool. And the. She rubbed her cheek against him! PERFECT VISUAL IMAGE.

Thank you for this beautiful update now give me number 2 quickly! (:

Feel better as well (:

I do not know what you refer to by failed attempt...all I see is success at making everyone swoon 😆

Please continue soon. Can't wait...😭

hey

That was SUPER ROMANTIC...
Continue soon...
PM me when u update...



Mariam...

Aww thank you so much for all your wonderful comments beautifuls. I didn't know it would get such a good response. MWAHH!!
And as for this, didn't want to update after today's episode… I HAVE LOST THE WILL TO LIVE! My poor babies were crying! Why oh why?
but I thought if I leave it too late, sab ke upaar se nikaah ke bhooth uthar jayega (for me it already has and sorry for the horrendous hindi) so yes, here you go lovelies…

Part Two

She looked back as she rushed forward only to crash into someone. She closed her eyes as she held the other person, both spinning and finally falling on top of each other,

'Ouch' yelped Zoya taking the impact of the fall as she half sat on the floor with the other person tangled in her arms. She opened her eyes to look into a pair of mischievous eyes glaring at her, 'Tamater tum?'

'Kya hai Zoya, dekh rahi hoon aaj kaal aap kitne uthavala ho rahe ho tumhare saab rasme jaldi jaldi karne ke liye' Teased Najma as she adjusted herself on Zoya's lap and put her hand under her chin as she played her eyebrows up and down,

'Tamater!' Zoya nudged her arm as she blushed a little,

'Oh ho, kitna sharma rahe ho' Najma pointed to her cheeks, 'What's that?' Najma widened her eyes as she had a closer look, Zoya hand's shot up to her cheek,

'Woh… Woh Actually…' Zoya spoke nervously as she tried thinking of excuses. She looked into Najma's eyes; she was getting there.

'Woh Actually… tumhare gaal mein haldi already lagi hai' Najma smiled, she followed Zoya's gaze to her room, 'OMG! Bhaijaan ne-' Najma shrieked as she tried jumping up only to have Zoya pull her back down and hug her by wrapping her arms around her tightly.

'Tamater, aaj kaal tum na bohot baatein karna seekh gaye ho!' Zoya smirked whilst Najma looked at her, confused at her expressions; did she just lose the game? Oh no thought Najma before praying, 'Yeh haldi kaise laga, yeh tumhare liye janna zaroori nahin hai my sweetooo' Zoya smiled widely, 'Lekin, agar tum mujhe cherna nahi choruge, mein na tumhare nikaah uss laddoo jaisa golmol chashmeesh se kara doongi, you know sangeet wala' Zoya rolled her eyes backwards to indicate who she's talking about.

'Kaise mazaak-' Najma played with her lips,

'Bhabie banne wali hoon tumhari, mere raaj challenge yahaan' She looked at Dilshad and smiled victoriously, Najma laughed out sarcastically, 'Tumhare road trip…' Zoya sealed her lips as she played her eyebrows up and down, 'Tumhare bhaijaan…'

'Sorry BHABIE!' Squealed Najma before hugging her tight, both the girls let out a laugh. They rocked side to side,

'Yahan kya ho raha hai?' Asked Dilshad as the girls broke out of the hug,

'Kuch nahin' They both laughed as they helped each other up...

'Chalo rasam shuru karte hain…' said Dilshad as she put her arms around both of her daughters, taking them towards the decorated hall.

Asad watched through the flowy curtains as the ladies put the flower jewellery on Zoya. Her glowing face brightened up the room as she smiled endlessly at everyone; excitement clearly visible on her face. He smiled seeing Dilshad kiss her cheeks, how much he wanted to do that. He put his hand over his cheek remembering the beautiful moment they shared just minutes ago. Her cheek against his, how effortlessly she made him lose his senses. Asad jumped up when he heard Dilshad's voice,

'Zoya tumhare gal pein yeh kya hai? Yahan aao, mujhe dekhne do' Dilshad wiped Zoya's cheek before taking her hand towards her face to investigate, 'Yeh toh haldi hai… yeh kaise?' Dilshad's voice trailed off in confusion.

'Woh…' Zoya squirmed on her seat as she looked in all directions, Asad hid behind the pillar closing his eyes, his breathing suddenly heavier than before; it's as if he was being questioned. He massaged his forehead as he mentally scolded himself for even doing this, now they'll get caught. He did a small march from one side to another as he tried calming himself down,

'Bhaijaan!' Whispered Ayaan as he called out from a few metres away, Asad turned and froze. He watched as Ayaan gathered all his fingers on both of his hands and continuously put them together before shaking both of them side to side. Asad widened his eyes as he blushed slightly before glaring at his brother. Ayaan held his stomach as he burst out laughing almost falling backwards, Asad pressed his temples in embarrassment. He demonstrated his fists to Ayaan to which he pretended to zip his lips and indicated he was going. Asad nodded before he pressed his eyes to tell him he managed to do what he went for whilst grinning idiotically,

'Oh ho' Mouthed Ayaan as he aww'd at his brother, he blew him a kiss as he played his eyebrows up and down, he then ran for his life seeing his brother's expressions change. Asad pretended to bang his head against the pillar; why did he even share his ideas with Ayaan? He sighed before sneaking through the white curtains to see what was going on,

'Woh kya hai na poophie, I put it on behalf of Mr Khan' She smiled as she spoke really fast and breathed out, Asad banged his head against the pillar. Zoya looked up at a grinning Dilshad with wide eyes realising what she said, 'Nahi woh kya hai na…' She gazed at Najma for help,

'I just prepared the haldi a bit ago, how did you-' Questioned Dilshad suspecting something,

'Woh kya hai na ammi, I wanted to check if Zoya was allergic to haldi, so we did a tester… and to tease her, I put it on her on behalf of Bhaijaan knowing they wouldn't be able to meet each other' Najma said as Zoya sighed a breath of relief. Zoya looked at her; thank you. Najma smirked as she shook her body side to side; Zoya rolled her eyes at her antics.

'Really?' Dilshad looked at the girls suspiciously, 'Anyways, let's start…' Dilshad got Zoya to sit on a stool whilst four ladies held a yellow scarf over her head, Zoya smiled sheepishly as the ladies started applying the haldi on her,

'Yeh tumhare shauhar ke liye aur zyada sundar hone ke liye' One of the ladies told her as she applied the haldi on her arms, Zoya looked down as her cheeks turned a little crimson,

'Really?' Squealed Najma, 'Wahan lagaye' She pointed before dipping her fingers into the haldi bowl and applying it on Zoya's neck, feet and her nose. Zoya held Najma by the elbow as she too grabbed at the haldi bowl picking up as much as she could in her hand and smearing it over Najma's cheeks,

'Kehte hai, jis kunwari ladki ko dulhan ki haldi lagti hai, uske jaldi se nikaah ho jaati hai! Hai na, phoopie?' Dilshad laughed as she nodded. Zoya side hugged Najma as they rest their head against each other with Dilshad joining them.

'Aur haldi lagao Zoya?' Asked Najma,

'No omg no Tamater please…' Zoya jumped up shaking her head and ran with Najma chasing her behind, 'NOOO!' Zoya leaned against the wall defensively whilst Najma pressed both of her hands over her face and smudged it making sure she painted it properly.

'There you go!' Najma smiled victoriously before walking off whilst Zoya pretended to cry. She was about to get her back when she noticed someone's shadow behind one of the pillars outside. She smiled as slowly walked towards it,

'Chup chup kar kya dekh rahe ho, Mr Khan?' She teased as she leaned against the opposite side of the pillar. Asad was startled hearing her voice; he half turned to see the side of her shoulder. He too leaned against it as he looked up into the sky,

'Aur kitna khoobsurat lagna hai aapko... mere liye?' He whispered, 'Mein toh already aap pe fida hoon' Zoya held her breath as her hand went over her chest; did he just say that? Her lips curved into a smile as she felt her chest rise up and down faster than before, Asad laughed openly as he turned his face to his side, 'mujhe aap se kuch kehna hai… Zoya.'

'Kahiye…' Zoya closed her eyes,

'Ahem' Coughed Asad preparing himself for the speech, 'Hum dono kitne alag…' He paused for a moment; he slid his hand down the pillar and placed it above hers. He brushed the top of her hand with his thumb to which she reacted by turning her hand. They slowly intertwined their hands with each other as she brought her other hand round gliding them over his to perfectly fit in between the gaps,

'Humesha' whispered Zoya as she tightened her grip,

'Humesha…' He replied with a smile, 'Kehne ki bohot khoshish hai meine lekin keh nahi paye… pata nahi tum jante ho ya nahi… lekin humaare nikaah ho rahi hai kaal…' Zoya laughed, 'lekin aaj kehna chahti hoon, mein bataana chahta hoon ki aap mere zindagi mein kitne khaas ho… yeh ilfaaz joh aaj mein aapse se kehna chahta hoon, bina bataaye chen nahi milega… mein aapse-'

'Mein aapse be imtehaan mohabbat karta hoon Mr Khan' Zoya whispered softly, Asad's mouth fell wide open. He remained in the same position for a moment before composing himself,

'Zoya?'

'Jee?'

'Ek baar Asad kehkaar pukaaro?'

'Jee Mr Khan'

'Miss Farooqui!!'

'Asad'

'I love you too…' He laughed as they both stood there with their backs against the pillar holding onto each other. Dilshad and Najma watched them aww'ing at their confession and smiling foolishly. They left them alone and headed inside.

Tomorrow, they were finally going to become one. Their family was now going to be complete. Well almost, until their beautiful dimpled children come into the picture. Asad and Zoya both glanced at their bench, their children roaming around the garden whilst they chased after them; picture perfect.

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Okiiess me dunno what I wrote. It was a quick thing cus of my off mood! In this Tannu left with her husband and committed suicide! LOOL!

Ignore the mistakes, I hope I lived upto your expectations.

Since I've done a confession for each ceremony, does anyone want a nikkah one? No suhagraat please, I don't think I'll ever dream about that in the right way ever again :(

Anyhooo! Toodles!

MWAH! xoxo

RES!
mwahahaha.

UNRES!

OMG, the episode feels :(
I love angsty song sequences though, so i am looking forward to Ajmer but my babies crying. I just wanted to step into my laptop and give them both a huge hug!

AHHH, the Zoya-Tamatar bond feels! How cute, they actually need to dedicate a few episodes to their interactions after the actual wedding! You should be hired to write them, shhhooo cute, HAI.

Aw, the Ayaan-Asad feels too! I could so imagine Vikrant doing that, he is such a cutie pie! HAIII!

HAAAI, "mein already aap pe fida hoon" , damn. Asad needs to say that to Zoya so I can melt into a pool of goo. HOW CUTE!

K NOW YOU GOT ME IMAGINING THEIR BABIES! Dear Lord, their babies will be so hot. Awww.

LOVED IT GURL! Amazing job! I left Kuch Kuch Hota Hai feeels to read this and it was so worth it! *fangirls*

TTYL GURLLL! XOXO. :)

OH that was SO so BEAUTIFUL...loved it...😳