ASYA Two Shot: Yeh Haldi (Part2/Page6) - Page 4

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Read both parts together, such a feel good read!! (: Love how descriptive it is, brought vivid images to my mind as I read it (: Simply beautiful! (:
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Posted: 12 years ago
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RES

YOU ARE AMAZING!!!! Do you know that!? This was sooo FLIPPING ADORABLE! From Najma teasing Zoya, to Zoya teasing Najma and the girls covering up together when Dilshaad was suspicious was just tooo good!

I LOVE how Asad was standing behind the pillar spying on them. So cute how he can't stay away from her AT ALL even for 5 minutes! And Ayaan, OMG so funny. The way they bond over him being in love with Zoya and how he shared the idea with him, was something I was really looking forward to seeing in the show. I hope after Ajmer they touch on this. It would really nice to see Ayaan teasing Asad about Zoya a little more. But you did it so well. Their silent conversation was just so cuteee!

And Najma saving Zoya and chasing her with the haldi was adorable. I wish they had more bonding moments between these two in the show. I really feel that her character is being wasted to an extent. But I hope they use her more. Like this :)

And my favourite part THE CONFESSION!. It was sooo cute how they were communicating while still not seeing each other's faces, but holding hands. I was AWW_ING along with Dilshad and Najma.. and I was just as shocked as Zoya when he said she was already incredibly beautiful hayee

Thank youuu! This was sooo needed after the last two episodes!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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I just *fangirled* all over this OS!!! Loved it! 'Mein toh already aap pe fida hoon' Awww shit! That line just killed me! Maayynn! This was just adorable! Absolutely head over heels in love with this Two shot! Please write a Nikaah confession! No suhagraat one ...I don't want to see a suhagraat yet! Not in the mood for that yet. The last two episodes just spoiled everything!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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That was awesome! So romantic. Wish AsYa were as open about their feelings on the show, then we wouldn't have a separation track. I loved your TS!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Makes me feel better after the hell thats has broken loose
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Posted: 12 years ago
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asya confessed
awww...cutie update!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#37
Awesum...luvd it..espcly d confessn..d unique n swt one..thnks 4 pm..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hahaha Ayan... Made me crack. Amezing
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Posted: 12 years ago
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gosh
that was wow
loved najma-zoya
and of course asaya rocked
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Posted: 12 years ago
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I think everyone is in bad mood nowadays but still you managed to write a beautiful update...
Since you have mentioned kids I am really imagining Asya running after their kids... it will be a cute sight...
I don't think I will want a SR of Asya for a long time... I need time to get rid of that disgusting picture in my head!!!
Edited by mysticlover - 12 years ago

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