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sheet_leher

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Posted: 12 years ago

#31

Congratulations on the second thread...you've woven a beautiful story...hope you continue soon

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finnie

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Congrats first of al. Read d prev parts n luvd each on of it. Do cont soon, n if pisibl om me

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NephilimByHeart

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Posted: 12 years ago

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congo aani for new thread .. but where is next part // m nt able to see it .. ur update was d most awaited one .

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SANYA

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Posted: 12 years ago

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congo🥳
very happy fr t2
isi baat pe give quick update
longing to read it 😊
hope best fr it👏

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Shivi.forever

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Its been so long since we got to read about this story.. plz update soon.. waiting waiting waiting for updateee...

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Afia Aisf Mahmood

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Congratulations on the 2nd thread! 😃

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kandygrover

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Congratz on the new thread!!!!

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kiki

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Posted: 12 years ago

#38

congrats for the second thread
& pls continue soon :)

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Aaniya

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Part 18 A

Asad immediately left the room in disappointment and frustration, after covering up her wounds with medicine and bandaid. He couldn't understand what was wrong with her. Was she always like this or was it him, who was suddenly expecting too much from her. He couldn't comprehend anything going on in his life.

He stood in the balcony, letting the night's cool breeze flow across his face and hair. He brushed his hair with his fingers and let out a sigh.

''Kyu kar rahi hain wo ye sab... Maine toh unhe sab kuch samjha bhi diya ab... Why doesn't she give me..our relation another chance... Am I really that bad and inappropriate for her..?'' was all Asad could think of himself at that moment.

Minutes passed by and he stood there still, motionless wondering how wrong was he. Not able to understand the extent to which he had pushed her away from him.

He was brought out of his thoughts by the sound of the door. He turned around and saw his ammi and Najma enter the house with hands full of shopping bags and a big smile adoring their face.

He didn't want to spoil it for them,so he tried looking normal and went towards them asking, ''kaisi rahi aapki shopping..??''

''Shopping bohat achi rahi bhaijan... Hum Zoya bhabhi ke liye bhi kuch laaye hai... Kahan hai wo ???'' came Najma's chirpy reply.

Dilshad looked at Asad, whose expression immediately changed into one of grief. She thought he looked worried, so she went near him and calmly asked, ''Zoya kahan hai Asad ??''

Asad looked up to meet his mother's worried expression with his own face fallen like a dead flower. He couldn't help but feel responsible for Zoya's condition.

''Wo andar apne kamre mein hai...'' he said softly.

Dilshad and Najma went in to see Zoya only to find her hand covered up with a bandaid. They filled her with so many questions in one single breath, that Zoya could only smile and reply, ''Ammi.. Tamatar... Aap log bewajah itna ghabra rahe hai... Bas thodi si mamuli chot hai... Kal tak theek ho jaayegi...'' she assured them.

''Zoya tum isse mamuli chot kehti ho...!?! Poora haath bandha hua hai tumhara... Aur dekho kitna laal hua ja raha hai...'' came Dilshad's panicked reply.

''Ammi mujhe dard nai ho raha... Mai theek ho jaungi...'' Zoya tried reassuring her.

Asad, who was all the while standing at the door way, looked at his wife in awe. How she managed to smile and reassure others when she herself was in so much pain. I've got to learn a lot from her, he thougt to himself.

Reality hit him so hard when he heard his ammi's next set of words.
''Lekin ye sab hua kaise ??? Mai Asad ko chod ke gayi thi na tumhare paas... Usse tumhara khayal bhi nahi rakha gaya...!?''

On the other hand, Asad felt so bad about himself for not even being able to take care of his wife for a few hours, let the whole life. The guilt that had already burdened him so much, only seemed to get heavier with his every mistake.

He could never make up to her for all his gunaah, and here he stood, planning to make everything right in their lives and wondering about her reactions; When he had never done anything right that deserved appreciation or love in return. Yet she had managed to shower him with all her love and gave him a reason to smile in his life where as he had always only managed to hurt her, be it physically or emotionally.

Zoya could see the change of expressions on his face and his head lowered down. Wo uski rag rag se waqif thi... And she knew that he was considering himself responsible for everything.

She could bare to see anything in this world, but not his head lowered down, that too because of her, for something he had not even intended to do. It wasn't even his mistake and to see him feeling so much guilty, only pained her ! Even more than the burnt hand.

Just when Asad was about to come up with a sorry, Zoya butted in saying, ''Ammi iss mein unki koi galti nai thi... Wo toh mera hi dhyaan rakh rahe they... Lekin mere haath se garam paani ka bartan gir gaya... Aur ye sab ho gaya !''

She completed her sentence and looked up to see him, only to find so much gratitude in his eyes. He was amazed at how she managed to prove him innocent when it was his mistake, atleast he thought so.

Dilshad calmed down a bit after hearing to Zoya's side of the story. She called Asad in and instructed him to take her to the near by doctor for dressing, which Zoya clearly denied to.

Dilshad knew how ziddi she was, so she twisted her words and made her understand that it wasn't for her but the baby.
''Beta aisi halat mein..choti se choti chot bhi bache ke liye haanikarak ho sakti hai...''

Zoya placed her hand on her stomach listening to her Ammi's words. She had completely forgotten about the growing life in her.

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Continued on the next page !!

Edited by _Aaniya_ - 12 years ago