FF - Torn by Hidden Desires(Link to thread#2) - Page 69

I read all the chapters - all 10 - in one go. Man I have only seen such a talent on either television or in novels. Ur a natural born writer.
Ur stories continuously reminded me of mannet, asya and arshi. N relised tht most of the parts were completely different from them n really unique.

Plzz update the next chapter soon n also do pm me if possible plz.

Also I would like to give u a suggestion. Do put all the pg nos of all ur chapters up till now on the 1st pg. it takes years to find the next chapter. Or u cud also put the pg no of the next chp at the end of the previous one.
:-)
DOXOXOXOXOXXO

OMG LOVED IT!!!!!!! it was AWESOME!!!!! please please please continue son!! and thank you so much for the pm!!!

wow..atleast zoya asks abt d relatn..

Loved the update.. Please do continue soon!!!!

Fantastic update ,the way Asad apologize to Zoya was Awesome

Read it one go.. loved it..! Update soon :)

Awesome update! Can't wait for the next part!

edited my comment on next page 🤣 page 104 !

Aww it ws so nice zara.wel done