FF - Torn by Hidden Desires(Link to thread#2)

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Hey Guys !! I'm starting a new FF on AsYa ... Many of u must have read my OS's on them but now I thought of starting a FF ... I'm quite regular in updating so u people don't have to wait for days 😆

And lastly I hope u like my Work !! 😳


Character Sketch

Asad Ahmed Khan



At 27 , he is one of the most powerful and influential business man of Bhopal .. Owns DilShad's constructions shortly named after his mother .. He's Insanely handsome driving every woman to his direction but at the same time arrogant , rude , and as some people put it 'stone-hearted' but they know very little about this Sinful man ... No matter how cold-shouldered he appeared to the world , his heart went out for his Ammi and Sister ..



Zoya Farooqui



She is Beautiful , Introvert and Loving .. At the age of 23 she has gone through the worst phase of her life , losing her Mother ,Father and Appi in an accident she lost her hope of living .. Vulnerable and fragile , she longs for love of loved ones ..


Rest of the characters are as follows

Dilshad Ahmed Khan - Asad's Ammi

Najma Ahmed Khan - Asad's sister

Tanveer - Asad's childhood Family friend . Will be introduced later ..






Asad was driving back home after a hectic day .. Exhausted , he was cursing the traffic of Bhopal that didn't let him move an inch ...

Suddenly his eyes caught something unusual ..

Far , He saw a girl sitting on a bench near a pavement .. He couldn't see her face properly as she was into something .. But he did notice her tears .. As she raised up her hand to wipe them away ... She was dressed in dark black skinny jeans and a white full sleeves top ..
Eager , he pulled down his window to have a better view .. There he saw her walking , she looked lost and tired .. He peaked a little out of his window , Asad didn't exactly know why he was doing these strange things ,but there definitely was something that was compelling him to do 'unlike Asad things' ..
Just then a small boy came near her wid some flowers .. The moment she turned in Asad's direction to look at the boy , he heard some Honking ...

'Aahhh! The traffic was moving' asad once again mentally cursed the traffic , but this time for a different reason..

As he accelerated his car , for one last time he turned around to see her ...but she was gone ..long gone..

Widout any regret in his mind , he moved ahead , taking this as a gesture from Allah that things would never ever be in favour of Mr Asad Ahmed Khan..


Asad rang the bell of his house ..

And a smiling Dilshad opened the door..

'Salaam Ammi .. ' He spoke entering ..

'Walekum-Salam Asad .. How was ur day?' Dilshad offered him water

'It was okay . How's Najma now ?' He asked concerned

'She's still in Shock .. Not even a single tear or a word ... Its been 2 months Asad ..' Dilshad's face grew pale

Asad touched his Ammi's hands
'It will be fine ... She will be fine Ammi ... Just like u ! Allah will give her strength ..my sister is not weak'

Dilshad smiled and nodded ..

'Asad I wanted to tell u something' she spoke taking a seat next to Asad.

'Tell me Ammi'

She cleared her throat , fearing her son's reaction..

'We'l be having a visitor for a few days ' she spoke breathlessly..

'WHAT ? WHO ?' He asked , his eyes getting wide

'Relax Asad . U remember Anwar ? Ur saba khala's best friend ?'

Asad thought for a while , then finally nodded.

'He lost is wife , her mother and father in an accident back in new york ! Its very sad , They were nice people .. But her wife's sister is still alive , she had gone wid Anwar to buy a gift for anwar's anniversary .. And they ended up surviving becoz of that.. So now he doesn't want her to live in New York becoz she's gettin traumatised thinking about her parents and Appi , anyone would right ? That's why he called , if she could stay wid us for sometime as its even her parents hometown.. And she'l be safe ' Dilshad completed , taking a deep breath..

Asad went in a deep thought .. He did feel pity for the girl .. But he hate strangers , especially in house .. Najma's condition was also caused by a stranger once ..

'Ammi I feel sorry for the girl . But u know I don't like strangers ' Asad retorted

'Zoya's not a stranger Asad , I know her family and especially Anwar very well.. And its just a matter of a few days'

Asad raised an eyebrow ' exactly , how many days?'

Dilshad sheepishly said 'errrmmm... 2-3months'

'But Asad she's really sweet and I promise there would be no problem' she quickly added

Asad got up and shook his head ..

'Have I ever said NO to you Ammi?' He spoke wid a stern face

Finally Dilshad sighed in relief ..
'Shukriya Asad ... Now u go get fresh , I'll serve the dinner '

Asad nodded and went upstairs ..

Before entering his own room , he went to Najma's

He softly opened the door and saw her sleeping .. She looked pale and drained out ..

A lone tear escaped his eyes , seeing his sisters condition...

he shut the door ..and went to his room..

'Hello Anwar ?'

'Salaam Dilshad Bi'

'Walekum-Salaam.. Beta u can send Zoya to our place we have no problem'

'Shukriya Dilshad bi .. Bahut Bahut shukriya .. Tomorrow morning I'll come and drop her '

'No problem ... U can come anytime . Khuda Hafiz'

'Khuda hafiz' he spoke and cut the call.

'Zoya ! Zoya' he called her

'Yes Jiju' she spoke in a low voice

'Pack ur bags .. Tomorrow I'll leave u at Dilshad Bi's house' he spoke forcing a smile ..

'Okay Jiju' she quietly spoke and went to her room..

Anwar felt a lump in his throat seeing his dear Zoya like that . Once so cheerful , and fun-loving , Zoya was now a complete opposite .. As though someone sucked the life out of her .. He only hoped that staying wid a loving woman like Dilshad , would make her feel better ..



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Posted: 12 years ago
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loved what I read so far...and guess the story will go far...
so hoping to keep myself enthralled...
do hurry and pen..
all the best
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: rajnid68

<font size="3">loved what I read so far...and guess </font>thestory will go far...

<font size="3">so hoping to keep myself enthralled...</font>
<font size="3">do hurry and pen..</font>
<font size="3">all the best</font>



ThankYou soo much !! 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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ThankYou ! 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Zaraaa 🤗

unres

I LOVED IT! OMG CONTINUE CONTINUE CONTINUE CONTINUE CONTINUE CONTINUE. PM ME or anything as soon as you update. I love the idea. 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
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i loved your Siggys 😊 well yes i am interested.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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I will be waiting for your updates.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: MisHumptyDumpty

i loved your Siggys 😊 well yes i am interested.



ThankYou so muchh !! 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: ksen

great.continue soon



Thanks a lot ! 😳

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