FF - Torn by Hidden Desires(Link to thread#2) - Page 70

Originally posted by: Naughtynatty

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First of all thanks for the Zoya and Najma scene !! FInally the girl spoke and I loved the way Najma came across she doesnt want to share her problems but atleast she had the decency to apologise for her rude behaviour ! Awesome I literally felt that scene I know it wasnt that intense or anything but it made my heart smile😳

Akdu ka kuch nahi ho sakta aise to ek minute mein he will corner her but sorry bolne mein jaan nikalti hai😆

Btw I love how Zoya just stuffs the parathans something I would totally do😆I think Zoya shoudl confide about Najma coming to her room to Dilshad atleast I think its good psychologically and might be helpful to know !

You make office scenes so Hot☺️I swear all that we read I mean the novels they come in so handy for all this🤣Btw let me know when you starting the second book ! I am waiting to start it with you😆

Okay so amazing update as usual I am ur fangirl even you know that😆

Loveyaaa❤️

Awww Nattu babyyy ThankYou sooo muchhh love 🤗

And the office part made me smile 😆 thankYou thankYou ❤️

And yeahhh I started the book 😛 1st chapter done !!!

Originally posted by: nupsie

Zara🤗

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I loved loved loved it❤️😛
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I knew Najma is gonna b frens wid Zoya now...😛 I hope she opens up a bit more n shares her past wid Zoya...I wanna see Zoya Najma becuming the best of frens n Zoya bringing back Najma to a normal life😛

I am so happy to see that Zoya didn't back out frm the job n decided to face him..😃

n m so loving this Asad...😆 The guilt-ridden Asad, the nervous Asad, the smiling Asad, the restless Asad n the naughty Asad😆

U make Zoya look even more cute in her FF...u describe her soo well that m falling in more love with the Zoya in this story😳

The incident while going to the office was hawwwt☺️

I am loving the CAR ROMANCE☺️☺️

n aww he was so worried that she eats on time n that Zoya stuffing pizza in her mouth part was so so cute

<font color="#000000">n Asad drooling over her was all the more cute😳</font>

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OMG Asad is so so mischievous...he never leaves a single opportunity to get close to her n Zoya as usual falls for it everytime☺️☺️😆 n he removed the cheese frm the corner of her lips☺️☺️ I was literally blushing while reading the last part☺️

Thank God he apologized, even though the apology was very much in Asad style but he meant it frm jis heart so yeah...I liked it😳

n finally Zoya cud take his attitude no more n she said it...the closeness between them...watever is happening between them, n wat happened after that just made me blush more n more☺️☺️

I loved this part so so much...Amazing, Awesome, Superb, fantastic update Zara🤗

P.S. - I so much appreciate ur dedication towards this FF, that u r still updating it regularly...Love U❤️

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Awww Purrr ! Loved ur longgg wala commment 🤗

Yesss I try putting in emotions in every scene ..rather then just plainly writing it .. 😃

Every scene has a special feeling attatched to it ... And wid every update it grows deeper thts what I try to show so tht people can connect !

Am glad I made u blush ☺️

And ThankYouuu for appreciating my dedication.. I swear had I been a reader I would have thoroughly hated if someone left his FF inbtw 😛

ThankYou so muchhh!! Love u Purrr 🤗

Just love where this is going. Thanks for pm.

Just came across this ff and it is

OH SHIET! Those last 3 chapters were just delicious! Soo much has happened! I'm sorry I haven't commented yet ...but finally got time to read and then comment! Loved all three chapters! Fantastic!

Originally posted by: giee

<font size="2">Did they just accidentally touched each others lips ?😲☺️

Ohh freak
This was fabulous 👏
from car romance to office romance 😳
OMG I m AWESTRUCK
I seriously dont have words
I am blushing soo hard

So This was all I could manage

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Sorry for chotu sa comment
agla wala pakka bada
Have been a lil busy lately

But this was awesome
Continue soon 😃
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Awww Gieee no problem dear !!! 🤗

Thanks a lot for ur sweeet comment ❤️

And yeahhh they accidently brushed their lips together !

Originally posted by: Cup-Of-Chai

Un Razia

ZARAAA! I'll be honest. This update was even better than your last ones. 🤗 ☺️

Are you ever gonna tell us what Najma's SECRET is? I am dying to know. Anyways, the Zoya and Najma hug was so awesome. I like how you are making them bond together as well. Najma should be able to express her feelings to Zoya more now.

The dining scene was amazing. After that I loved how you wrote what was going on in each of their minds. Asad thinking of Apologising and Zoya thinking about not being too close to him. PERFECTO!!!

Asad Miyan Finally Apologised. I LOVE YOU BAS! His way of apologising was so drool worthy. Now thats what i call A HOT SCENE. 😆 Pachas Rang and Cross Aag Parhne ka tumhein to Faida ho hi raha hai saath mein we get such hot scenes too. BRAVO! 😆

Anyways, can't wait to read what happens next update soon baby. 🤗 i am your biggest FAN! Autograph abhi de do bad mein shayad Kittu ki tarhan Nakhre na dikhane lag jao. 😆

And i am blushy blushy after reading the update. ☺️ You Rock Chica!

Sadiaaa 🤗

I love u tooo Basss !!!!! 😆

Ur comment made me smile big time esp the 50shades n crossfire thing 😛 yess well they are my inspiration truly 😃
And I'm glad u liked it and it made u blushhh ☺️

Haaayeee ur my fan and I'm ur pankha tooo !!! 😆

ThankYou ! ThankYou ! ThankYou! ❤️

ThankYou sooo muchhh !!! 😊 and sure I'll update tomorrow !