FF - Torn by Hidden Desires(Link to thread#2) - Page 14

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Originally posted by: Naughtynatty

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😆Sorry Zinky I forgot to edit abhi kar rahi hoon !

I loved the part as usual and cliff hanger kahinki😡

I swear Najma is scaring me bichari ladki has gone thru some sort of break up or something i am guessing ...

Urgh Akdu Ahmed khan no concern but then on theotherhand he did apologise but phir bhi guest ke saath aisa behaviour no at all acceptable !

Chalo abh I will wait for the next part😳

😆 awww ur unwell so I spare u !!

ThankYou Nattu baby !!❤️ yepp Asad is Rude and Cold but he has hidden desires 😛

Will udpate sooon 🤗

loved it...

Nice story , concept , and update really like it update nxt part asap and thanks for the pm .😊

that was very good...it was well written... pls continue!!!!!!!! i wonder what happened to Najma...

2 PARTS IN 1 GO . SO NICE CONTINUE SOON

ThankYou so much everyone for ur lovely comments !! 😃

Love your FF. I'm really curious to know what happened to Najma. Maybe Zoya will be able to help her. And the apology scene was awesome. You write the characters reactions very well. Can't wait for the next chapter.

Originally posted by: Azriya

Love your FF. I'm really curious to know what happened to Najma. Maybe Zoya will be able to help her. And the apology scene was awesome. You write the characters reactions very well. Can't wait for the next chapter.

Aww thankYou so muchhh !! ❤️