FF - Torn by Hidden Desires(Link to thread#2) - Page 12

wow nice story 😊 continue soon😊

Loved the chapter. Continue soon.

awesome chapter

Was just as good as the first. I smell Asads new secretary. 😉 Wonder how he's going to stop thinking of her when she is in such close proximity.😉 Please update soon

Oh my God!! Najma... She was about to cut herself.. This is such a different Najma from what we see in the show... I am loving it. Loved the interaction between Asad and Zoya.. So much passion on Day 1 itself..😳.. Thank you so much for the PM..Looking forward to the next update.!

Originally posted by: nupsie

Zara...amazing update🤗...loved it❤️

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One day mein kitna kuch ho gaya😛😆

They had an eyelock in the ver first meeting n now this amazing AsYalicious moment...he amiled, he apologized, he even felt something for her...n he even got reminded of that gal he saw on the road..!! ❤️

n yayy Zoya is gonna join him as his secretary no??😛😆

That wud be wonderful, I so much wanted to see somethin like this in the show but Gul never thought of anythin like dis! m glad u did😆

n OMG Najma was gonna commit suicide😲

I hope Asad thanks Zoya for saving his sister's life, n m waiting for Najma's past to unfold!

Great Update...I know u will update tomorrow as well...waiting for the next part eagerly🤗❤️

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P.S. The Asad in ur story is not at all CHALLENGED in any way😆, he felt so much in their very first interaction ☺️

Awww Noopuurrr 🤗
Loved ur comment !!!

ThankYou sooo sooo muchhh 😃

And yes Asad won't be that emotionally challenged in my FF 😛