FF - Torn by Hidden Desires(Link to thread#2)

Sajilisha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#471

all in one go
it was awesome
continue soon👏

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Zara

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Posted: 12 years ago

#472

Zoya was in her room ... Figuring out what to wear ... Sobbing in between..

Yes becoz Asad shouted at her and she can't take loud voice of anyone .. It pierces her heart ... But she was determined to go wid Hamzah only to prove Mr Khan tht she's not his slave and she'l do what she likes ...

'He can't just ...use me anytime ...he pleases and then... Leave me like... Nothing happened ' she spoke wid hiccups

Suddenly she remembered the lift scene .. The closeness wid Mr Khan ...his warm rough hands squeezing her delicate waist .. And just when his breath was caressing her face ..how badly she wanted to be kissed by him...
Surprised at her own thoughts .. She fell flat on her bed ...wid instant butterflies ..

'Why ? Why m I so pulled towards Mr Khan? ' She spoke to herself ...

'Why does he effect me so much? Why can't I just admit the fact tht he's a manipulative dominating soul..'

Zoya's chain of thoughts was interrupted by a knock at her door ..
She quickly straightened and spoke 'come in'

'Zoya .. Beta ... How are u ?? Sorry I wasn't home when u came back .. ' Dilshad spoke

'Oh no problem Phuppi .. I'm great .. How was ur day?' Zoya spoke trying to hide her red eyes from Dilshad by searching for something to wear for the dinner..

'My day was usual .. Btw Zoya where is Asad ? Didn't u both come back together ?'

Zoya's face startled ..'Mr Khan isn't home yet?? How come ? He had a car and I took an auto yet I reached first?' She thought

'Zoya?' Dilshad spoke again

'Oh sorry phuppi... Wo Mr Khan had some work in office so I came alone' she spoke stammering..

'Oh acha...so u get fresh I'll set the dinner table'

'No phuppi wait '

Dilshad turned around..

'Wo ...umm...phuppi...I'm ...going out for dinner' Zoya spoke biting her lower lip

Dilshad's lips instantly curved up into a smile

'Dinner ? Ahann.. Or a date??' Dilshad teasingly asked Zoya..

Zoya couldn't help but blush a little ...

'Phuppi...nooo not a date ... Just dinner wid ...Hamzah Haayat ..'

'Ohhh the owner of Haayat towers ?? He's a really charming guy' dilshad replied making Zoya embarassed

'Yahh wid him phuppi ..soo ummm...I won't be there for dinner.. I hope u don't mind ???' Zoya asked not wantin to upset her phuppi

Dilshad gave a broad smile ' ofcourse not Zoya ..I'm glad ur going out wid someone .. '

'ThankYou Phuppi'

'Ur welcome beta .. Now get ready fast .. Its not good to make guys wait ' dilshad winked at her ..

And left the room...

Zoya felt a little light after talking to Dilshad ..

'I can't believe Mr Khan is her son' she rolled her eyes and got back to finding nice clothes ..

Meanwhile Asad was driving as Rashly as possible .. It was hitting his head high tht Zoya was going to be all alone wid another guy for many hours .. And especially Hamzah being the guy .. Blood was ready to blast out of his veins ..
He suddenly hated himself for being so rough on her ..

'If I was a little more soft ...maybe she wouldn't have agreed on going wid him'

'How could she agree on spending hours wid any other guy especially with whatever's been happening btw us ..I clearly see she's affected wid our close proximity .. Then WHY???' He accelerated his car more

Suddenly he remembered how her beautiful lips parted when he was inches away from her .. He knew she was expecting a kiss .. But all Asad wanted was to make her say 'No' to the dinner ... But this was one stubborn girl he had ever seen in his life .. She was like a mirror to his own deeds .. It attracted him more to her .. Even his closeness couldn't dominate her enough .. And he hated it .. He hated the fact tht she wasn't ready to give in to him.. She always wanted to the opposite of what Asad wanted ..

suddenly his car halted right outside his mansion.. And he saw a figure leaning against a silver BMW .. Asad got out of his car and saw the figure clearly .. It was Hamzah ...
His rage started taking over him.. As his fists tightened hard ..

'Oh helloo Asad ' Hamzah spoke smirking

Asad nodded .. And started walking towards his house ..

'Can u please send Zoya out fast ...I'm dying to see her '

The moment Asad heard that .. His whole body was ready to jerk back and knock out this man ..

He didn't say anything .. And walked inside ..

'Salaam Ammi' Asad spoke

'Walekum Salam Asad .. I've already served the dinner .. Get fresh and come fast ' Dilshad replied

'Ji ammi' he spoke and started climbing the stairs ..

Just when he stood outside his room.. Zoya's door clutched open and she came out ...the moment Asad saw her .. His heart skipped a beat instantly .. She wore a beautiful black suit ..it was fitted perfectly to her body .. It had more than a usual deep neck and the duppatta was on her right side .. she wore no makeup just peach pink gloss tht made her already kissable lips even more desirable .. All the raw feelings in him started to uproot instantly .. The look in his eyes were a reflection of his hidden desires for Zoya .. As Zoya turned to see Asad .. Her face flushed wid unknown heat .. Her entire body experienced an unknown rush seeing his eyes .. Zoya couldn't control her rapid breathing .. Chanting continously in her mind ...'Make him suffer Zoya' .. She began walking towards the stairs ..

As she walked past Asad ... His eyes closed taking in her 'not less than a drug' fragrance ..it injected more desires in every part of his body ..
But the minute he opened his eyes .. What stood infront of him.. Made him freeze ..
Zoya's back was exposed ..it was deep wid just 2 doris tied ..there was no way he was going to let her go wid Hamzah like tht .. It gave him all disgusting feelings .. What if he tries to touch her ? 'NO' she was his property ..

'Wait ' he shouted

Making Zoya numb .. She clutched to her dupatta .. Not turning back to Asad ..

'Ur not going to meet Hamzah wearing this'

Zoya felt immediate anger rising in her body again.. Mr Khan was again trying to control her .. Again trying to dominate her as if she was his personal property..

Widout turning back she replied
'What I wear is none of ur business Mr Khan.. And this is not ur office .. I'm no one but just a mere guest to u in this house ..so u have no right to talk to me like this '

And before Asad could say anything .. She went downstairs ..
Asad banged inside his room
'Ul pay for this torture Miss Farooqui ! I'll make u PAY FOR IT' he yelled to himself ..

'Mashallah Zoya u look beautiful' Dilshad said

'ThankYou so much phuppi ! And don't worry I'll be back before 12 ' Zoya replied sensing her phuppi's thoughts ..

She could then see a relief on Dilshad's face .. And Dilshad adored Zoya more now .. She understood Dilshad's misery widout her saying a word ..

'I wish I had one more daughter like u' dilshad kissed Zoya's forehead ..

'And I'm glad I have one more Ammi like u' Zoya spoke and hugged her ..

Zoya then left the house .. Asad in his room heard the door being closed .. And he did what he just didn't wanna do at any cost ..
He was standing by his window ..

Zoya came out and greeted Hamzah ...

'Hey Zoya !! Woww !! U look beautiful' he spoke ..

Asad could see the lust in his eyes .. As hamzah scanned Zoya from top to bottom..

'Thankyou H...amzah ..' She replied stuttering ..

She felt an unknown gaze on her ..

Hamzah undoubtedly looked handsome too .. Both Asad and Zoya and for tht matter even Dilshad couldn't deny the fact tht Hamzah was indeed good looking .. A perfect Chocolaty Guy...
But little did Asad knew .. Tht Zoya always fantasized a 'man' and not a 'chocolaty guy' ..

'U look great too' she replied ..

Asad saw both of them smiling .. He could even see a blush on Zoya's face .. It irritated him.. For the first time ever .. Zoya's crimson cheeks irritated him..

Hamzah opened the door for Zoya as she got in .. And once Hamzah was in ..

Asad had an instant flashback of how Zoya was in his car ..when he had put on her seat belt .. And they were just inches away ..

He banged his fists on the wall again.. His frustration and helplessness was reaching its peak .. Zoya was supposed to be dressed for him and no one else ..she was supposed to be "His" and no one else .. He didn't exactly know why was he calling her 'His' when he neither loved her nor even really liked her ..but all he knew was seeing her wid another guy was torturing his soul..

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Hamzah pulled the car infront of a big mansion..
It looked like a palace to Zoya...

'Umm where are we ?' She asked feeling nervous ..

'Outside my house ' hamzah replied

'What???' Zoya almost went in a faint coma hearing tht ..

'Yeahh ! Come on in' he got out and opened the door for her

No doubt the house was like palace .. Beautiful ... But she wasn't really comfortable wid the house idea .. It got her all bad feelings .. But she didn't really have an option now ..

Hamzah lead them both inside .. His house was royal.. It sucked all the breath out of Zoya as she felt like a ragged woman in this beautiful royal palace ..

'Hamzah .. Uve got a beautiful house' she spoke mesmerized ..

'Thanks Zoya .. Umm..I've never really got any girl to my house till now .. But u seemed different ' he spoke genuinely

Zoya felt a pang in her chest .. Maybe Hamzah wasn't that bad .. And till now he hadn't even touched her or anything..

'Are u hungry ?' Hamzah asked her

Zoya turned back to him and gave him a silent nod ..

'Is he mad ? Asking such stupid questions tht too to a girl' she rolled her eyes ..

Hamzah bought her to his roof top wich was beautifully decorated wid pink lights .. There was a table for 2 full of food .. Zoya couldn't help but feel a sense of guilt .. He really did make effort for her whereas she just came to teach Mr Khan a lesson..

Hamzah pulled out the chair for her and Zoya sat in.. 'Thanks ' she murmured as Hamzah took his seat opposite to her ..

On the other hand Asad was lying flat on his bed .. He just gulped down a few bites and told Dilshaad he was tired .. But on the contrary his thoughts were constantly being directed to Zoya and Hamzah .. He thought of all wrong things .. 'What if he was kissing her ?' How dare she let him kiss her ???
He remembered her bare back ..'Was Hamzah going to untie her doris ?' Was he caressing her back ? Was he kissing it ???

'NOOO ' asad screamed in his mind ..

'She belongs to me !! No one can touch her except for me ' he calmed himself down..

Once the dinner was over .. Zoya felt herself being relaxed in Hamzah's company .. He was a perfect gentleman.. They discussed abt Zoya's new york life .. Hamzah's friends , they both had similar taste in music and books ... And the food was indeed delicious .. But Zoya's mind was going to Mr Khan again n again.. When she heard a faint music becoming louder and louder wid each passing second .. And before she could react .. Hamzah was standing infront of her ..

'May I have the pleasure of dancing wid this beautiful lady?' He asked giving out his hand ..

Zoya smiled and gave her hand to hamzah ..as they slowly started dancing ..

'Umm ... Hamzah ..' Zoya spoke

Hamzah looked at her with a twinkle in his eyes ..

'Ur a nice guy' she softly spoke

Hamzah smiled ' ur a nice girl too Zoya .. Normally when I used to go out wid girls .. They used to be more interested in my money rather than me and thts the reason they used to end up in my bed .. Coz thts all they wanted ' he replied

Zoya could see honesty in his voice ..

'But ur so different ..and honestly I'm really jealous of Asad ..' He chuckled

'Jealous of Mr Khan ?? Why?' She asked amused

'Becoz he has such a pretty secretary all to himself .. And besides u even stay wid him... He's indeed really lucky' hamzah spoke twirling her around

Zoya could feel pain rising in her body .. 'Lucky ? Why not .. I'm treated like a puppet by Mr Khan' she thought

'Hey u alright?' Hamzah asked her

'Oh .. Sorry .. Yea I'm good .. Hamzah can we leave now ? Its gettin late ' zoya spoke getting worried for Phuppi..

Hamzah smiled

'Sure why not !! Come let's go' he replied as they both headed to the car ..

Once the reached the Khan mansion.. Asad who was still tossing on his bed heard the car being pulled outside his house .. He instantly got up and went to the window..

Zoya came out of the car .. And Hamzah was leaning once again..

'I had a great time Hamzah .' Zoya spoke genuinely

'Same here Zoya ..u are a wonderful company' hamzah replied

Zoya smiled ...

'Ummm Zoya ...' Hamzah spoke

'Yeaah??'

'I guess ...ehhh...I guess I like u' he softly said

Zoya's eyes went wide .. She felt really guilty for making Hamzah a way to torture mr Khan.. She unknowingly played wid his feelings ..

'I'm sorryy ! I didn't wanna bother u' hamzah quickly added ..

Zoya released herself from her trance

'Oh no Hamzah ! Its not like that .. Emmm..its just tht .. I consider u a really nice friend ...Only' she added

She could see Hamzah's face dropping .. And she felt even more bad ..

'I'm sorry' she slowly added

'Arre no problem Zoya !! I'm perfectly fine wid it ... Maybe someday I get lucky ' he smiled making her smile as well..

Asad was watching all of it wid jealousy in his heart and anger in his eyes .. Especially their close proximity .. He didn't even wanna think abt what all they would have done..

Suddenly his eyes caught something .. That turned his world upside down..

Zoya and Hamzah were hugging .. Their bodies were pressed together like one .. Asad noticed Hamzah's hand on Zoya's bare back .. His jaws clenched and a strange sensation crept in his heart .. As though someone stabbed his heart 'n' number of times ..

Zoya bid Hamzah goodbye and slowly went inside the house .. Thanks to the spare keys Phuppi gave her .. She didn't have to ring the bell and disturb everyone ..
She tip toed silently to her room..

She felt exhausted .. More becoz of hurting hamzah's feelings .. He wasn't a bad guy ofcourse .. But maybe Zoya was developing likings for bad guys only .. She thought of Asad .. He must be peacefully sleeping in his room..

Zoya removed her earrings and dupatta .. And tied her hair in bun.. She was about to take out her night .. When her door knocked ..

'Allah miyan !! Phuppi ko utha hee diya' she thought and went to open the door ..

Her jaw dropped as she saw Asad outside her room ..

'Mr Khan.. Aap?' She spoke

And asad barged inside her room and locked the door ..

'Allah miyan what's wrong wid u Mr Khan?' She asked

But the moment she saw his red eyes .. Her heart raced to the speed of light ..

Asad walked towards Zoya .. As she kept taking steps backwards ..

Finally she hit the wall .. And Asad came and stood right infront of her ..

'How was ur 'DATE' ?' He asked gritting his teeth..

Zoya felt fear taking over her ..

'It was ... G..Great' she replied ..

Asad inched his face near her's ..

'Really ? What did he do to make u feel great?' He asked looking right into her eyes ..

Zoya felt cheap with these indirect questions of Mr Khan..

'He's a nic..nice guy...'She stammered

And that was 'IT' for Asad .. Now he made sure Zoya witnesses one of his worst sides ..

He grabbed her hands and pinned them on either sides wid his own hands ..and he closed himself on her ..

'He made u feel his 'nice-ness' didn't he ?' Asad fanned her earlobe ..

Zoya felt a rush in her body ..but at the same time his questions were making her angry ..

'Mr Khan Stop it ! Hamzah is not like that .. He's not bad ' she argued ..

'So u mean he's good ? How good is he ? ' Asad licked her earlobe

'This good ?' He whispered ..

Zoya could feel her face getting hot ..

'Mr Khan..s..stop' she stammered

'Why? U don't feel good when I do such things ?' He asked moistly kissing her neck ..

Words seemed to have got stuck in Zoya's throat .. Only if Asad could see tears in her eyes ..

'Mr Khan..please ... ' She whimpered

But now Asad wasn't able to stop himself .. He was way too close to her .. And the thought of Hamzah being close to Zoya .. Was giving peaking his desires ..his passion and intensity was growing ever second he inhaled her musk scent ... Now even if he wanted he won't be able to stop..

he traced the her neck from below her ears to her shoulders wid his wet lips .. Her smell .. It was driving him crazy ..

Zoya could feel herself falling weak now .. She never denied her desire for Mr Khan ..instead she always tried to stand strong infront of him so tht she doesn't lose control..

Asad lowered the strap of her kameez ..

'Did he do this to u?' Asad asked sucking on her milky shoulders ..

Zoya moaned under his touch .. As his tongue licked the spot where he sucked to soothe it down..her body aching wid pleasure

'So u moaned like this when Hamzah touched u ?' He spoke tracing his lips down her deep neck ..

And that's when it struck Zoya of what Asad was thinking ..she immediately pushed him away ..

'Stop it Mr Khan ... What are u doing ???' She asked frightened

'Ohh !! So u only like Hamzah do these things to u? Suddenly my touch makes u wanna push me away?' He mocked at her

Zoya felt like needle pierce her heart .. 'Mr Khan thinks so ill of me ?' She thought .. And fresh tears started forming in her eyes ..

'Mr Khan.. Go away from here ' she choked

'Why should I go away ?? ' He raced towards her and held her shoulders

'Why didn't u go away when he touched u ? Why didn't u come to me when he touched ur back ?' Asad spoke as his hands went to her smooth back ..

Zoya hated the way her body was responding to Mr Khan's touch.. She wanted to push him away .. For thinking so low of her .. But his touch was mking her body pull towards him..

She looked in his eyes .. And thts when she sensed jealousy ..there was a kind of pain in his eyes ..

She silently nodded her head in a no indicating she didn't do anything wid him..

'No ?? So u liked when he hugged u back down there ? I saw it .. I saw it wid my own eyes .. How his hands were caressing ur back ... And u let him.. U let him do it .. What all did u let him do ? Tell me ?' She shouted

Asad was now making Zoya stoop low in her eyes .. She turned her back to him.. Not wanting to hear any of his disgusting questions

'I didn't do anything Mr Khan' she shouted back

But Asad was in his own trance to listen to her anymore .. He saw it .. Saw it wid his own eyes .. How hamzah's hands were roaming on her back .. On the back only Asad has a right on ..why he had a right on her , even he wasn't sure off ..

Asad grabbed her waist from behind and pushed her against the wall ..

'I saw it Miss Farooqui... Wid my own eyes ...' He spoke pressing her waist wid his hands

Zoya gasped in a painful pleasure that Asad was putting her through right now ..

'Mr Khan... That was just a ... Friendly hug' she tried to speak..

'Ohh don't u tell me tht ... What all did u do in the name of friendship then?'

His desires reaching their peak as he saw her back to him..

'Did he do this ?' And untied her top dori wid his teeth..

'And Called it friendly?' He asked

Zoya couldn't take it anymore .. Her heart did want him to stop .. She was liking her closeness wid him.. Asad's intensity was providing her wid an unclear satisfaction..what he said now was hardly bothering her .. Maybe Becoz Zoya had sensed it all came out becoz of jealousy ..

'Mr Khan..' She whispered

And Asad pulled her 2nd dori wid his teeth..

Zoya was hardly breathing now .. Her whole body was aching wid pleasure .. She placed her hands on asad's tht were holding her waist .. And entwined her fingers in his ..

The next thing she felt ... Jolted the hormones in her body .. Asad was placing moist open mouthed kisses on her back .. Her soft back was being traced by his rough wet lips .. Zoya's back instantly arched .. As Asad continued to blow kisses all over her back .. Tht belonged to him..

'Don't go back to him... Please ' he spoke inbetween the kisses ..

He squeezed her waist again..

'Are ... U...are... Jealous ?' Zoya gasped out ..

These words had hit like daggers to Asad .. 'Jealous and Asad ???'

He immediately jerked away from her ..

Zoya turned around .. To face him..

'No...I'm not jealous' Asad replied .. His jaws clenching

'Don't lie Mr Khan.. All this .. Ur closeness to me .. Telling me not to go back to Hamzah ... It was all becoz u were jealous right ? Jealous of him being close to me ?'

'SHUTUP Miss Farooqui !!!! I'm NOT jealous of anyone ... ' Asad replied in a tone tht sent shivers down Zoya's spine..

'Even u know that isn't true mr Khan.. U were jealous .. Admit it !!! Why can't u ?' She pleaded

Asad held her shoulders and looked right into her eyes ...

'I can never be jealous ! I did all this just to see if u still react to my touch the same way or Hamzah's touch has mde u any different to my touch'

Zoya's heart crushed into pieces as she heard tht .. She felt like a used up toy ..

'U know what Mr Khan?'

'Hamzah's touch was way better than yours .. Infact he is way better than u ' Zoya replied staring right into his eyes ..

Asad's mind started to become numb ... But there was no way he was going to let her get away with this..

'Oh so I see ..Ur not worth of my touch anymore ' he whispered right into her face

And left her room in a second .. Leaving a shattered Zoya behind ..

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giee

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Posted: 12 years ago

#473

I am the first one

Okay I ve alot to gush about 😆

Someone please switch on the AC ...HOTNESS ☺️
I am greedy I want more ABHI please 😳

The dude was so JEALOUS 😆

" Zoya was supposed to be dressed for him and no one else ..she was supposed to be "His" and no one else .. He didn't exactly know why was he calling her 'His' when he neither loved her nor even really liked her ..but all he knew was seeing her wid another guy was torturing his soul.."

This took my heart away ❤️
He doesn't want her to dress up for anyone else
He doesnt want her to go out with someone else
She is *HIS*

"She belongs to me !! No one can touch her except for me ' he calmed himself down.."

Yess she belong to him and only him...( I thought Humzah ll try n...and Akdu ll make a heroic entry) But what you wrote is way better...infact nothing can be beat it 👍🏼

Okay now coming to the INTENSE part
Girl how old are you ? 😆
Ohh boyy...his jealousy took over
I could totally imagine it ...and trust I was blushing like a lovestruck teenager
he pinned her to the wall
untied her doris...kissed her back ☺️

and then "Don't go back to him... Please ' he spoke inbetween the kisses ..

He squeezed her waist again..

'Are ... U...are... Jealous ?' Zoya gasped out .."

I almost skipped a heartbeat...he knows that is jealous
but wont admit it 😔

I loved how Zoe gave him back by saying that Humzah was better

This update was WOW 👏
I ve already read it 2 times 😆

P.S - will he fire her from the job..will he ?😭

Edited by giee - 12 years ago

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sadia

@Cup-Of-Chai

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Posted: 12 years ago

#474

Unres

Zaraaa that was a Brilliant, Amazing, Extremely Hot update as always! I always wanted to see a jealous Asad and Voila! here i got it.

Grinning and Blushing like an idiot was actually what i did throughout reading the update. Dude! What an update. Do i need to say more? Okay i will.. 😆

Zoya in black Asad not able to handle his Desires, The date with Hamzah, Asad witnessing all that, Dilllu-Zoya Convo, Asad noticing her every move EVERYTHING was well written oh and especially the whole scene in Zoya's room. God as i always say Asad Miyan is such a THARKI INSAAN in your FF 🤣 not in a bad sense though i kinda enjoy this dominating Kind of Asad. The whole scene was Too Hot To Handle lmao! 18+ 😆 I hope the next Update is even hotter. ☺️

Simple loved it to the core. Update soon baby! 🤗

Edited by Cup-Of-Chai - 12 years ago

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Ayra Nuzhat

@-LazyLamhe-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#475

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unres

It started with Asad being Possessive and then he was Obsessed...Allah Miyan..whats wrong with him?

Already waiting for the next part...plz update soon..I wanna know what Zoya plans to do next...

thanks for the pm

Edited by deepthoughts - 12 years ago

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Natasha

@Naughtynatty

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Posted: 12 years ago

#476

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*edited*😎

Black churidar she must be have killed Asad !! Maar Daala 😳

DIlshad being awesome and cool and understanding that date shate is necessary and completely normal in this age and day not like MR. Akdu Ahmed Khan

Jealousy Gosh Love it !! Burn Mr. Khan Burn !!

You make Hamzah sound so sweet please get Najma better and make her have an affair with him 😆

Uff Asad ka kya karen he should be just gate crashed the date 🤣 to know what happened.

He cannot treat her like shiz. Period.

This man needs to understand how to manage his anger !! Basically anger management classes asap.

You are attracted to a girl admit it you like her admit it YOU ARE JEALOUS ADMIT IT !

I swear Zoya should see Hamzah more we chuddy buddy with her hug him and kiss him on the cheek and then Akdu can find his B*lls and react !

Lool sorry if I went overboard !

Mr Khan got me all annoyed 😆

You are awesome ! 😳 and I love you lots 🤗❤️

Edited by Naughtynatty - 12 years ago

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