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CupofCoffeee

@CupofCoffeee

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#171

Once AGain I loved it ...simply awesome🤗

U hav so well described Asad n Zoya's feelings, their awkwardness n the sudden strange attraction that they hav depeloped towards each other ❤️ n OMG Asad ran his fingers through her hands n helped her with putting the icepack as well☺️

Just one day it has been n so much...😛

m just loving how u hav given a change in AsYa's characters.!! Asad in ur story quickly realized his mistake n even apologizes or makes up for the wrong he has done!

n even Dilshad...she is an angel...she already appointed Zoya as his secretary

Waiting eagerly for the next part...😛

Amazing Story...brilliantly written...keep giving us more n more!!

Edited by nupsie - 12 years ago

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sadia

@Cup-Of-Chai

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#172

Zaruuu, i just loved the update. I was enjoying it so much you always end it at the exact moment. 😆 btw Asad Miyan seems to have fallen in love with Zoya as he is having thoughts about her. 😆 btw this is gonna be interesting to read i mean Zoya being Asad's secretary. 😆 at home they'll be together and then at work too. 🤣 i loved the part where Asad helped her with cleaning the bruises. It was so ROMAANTEEEK! ☺️

Update soon. 🤗 (even though i know you would, you are one of those people who update without saying) 😆 😳

Edited by Cup-Of-Chai - 12 years ago

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Natasha

@Naughtynatty

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#173

RES

*edited*

I am really SOrrry !!!!

Here we gooo I loved the update as usual well what can I say you are an amazing writer !!

Stupid Asad had to do that react first and then think about it !!!!

Najma is mad whats wrong with her I am worried bichari ladki really needs help from Zoe the psychologist

Poor Zoe puts up with his behaviour all the time and then he is also pyscho gives her relief as well.

But my fav Dil is amazing 😳

And please maaf kardo mujhe for the late edit ! I ❤️ you !!

Update soon I know aaj blosk hai kal ya parson kar dena !

Edited by Naughtynatty - 12 years ago

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ALISHA ZEN

@LuvUAsYa

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#174

RES 😆

ballle ballleee... im baack... cholyy 4 being late!!!😆 😳

frst of ol gimme a hug!!! cmon cmon come faast ... 😆

u solved my 1 of d bigggest probs in seconds...😳

actllly i cant send buddy requests due to some probs in my id bt can accept 1

n tht ws sooo sweeettt of u to send me a buddy request !!! thaaanx aloot dea!!

n wt shoul i sayyy bout d update...

im speechlesss!!! 👏 👏👏 👏

it ws sch a nice update!!!

n touchy as weeelll!!!

loved asad's concern 2wards zoya n his siis!!!

in short an amaaazn updt!!!

aahaaa zoya as asad's secretry ths is gonnna b intrstng im sureee...

gosh... ppleaaase updt asap!!!

im veryyy xited!!

tnkkkooo chooo much 4 d PM dea!!

tnxx alottt!!

Edited by LuvUAsYa - 12 years ago

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Mahi Singh

@Kaya13

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#175

res

unres

EEP!!! Don't be mad at me I no i am super late..I did not even cmmnt at the 2nd chap...Actually I read it and was abt to cmmnt when BAM! our electricity went and my cmmnt was left hanging😭..and wen I came bk to cmmnt I saw another chappie😆 so I began to read that.

Ok so getting to the story..u hv really described the emotions well..Asad is a jerk as usual😆 bt i'm sure our angel Zoya wl wave her magic wand and all will be well!

Amazing chaps..bt can't expect anything less from u!😃

Edited by Kaya13 - 12 years ago

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BlueEyes

@GulaabiAakhein.

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#176

Hi Zara, I am Manjari here 🤗

Just got your PM so thought I should check your FF out. I have just read the Prologue yet but I have to say that your plot is really strong. It has so much potential and so I will surely read further :D Thank you so much for the PM.

I will get back to you after reading the rest of it :)