FF: Mangalpur Madness #2 - last part on pg 41 - Page 16

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Posted: 12 years ago
Res! :)

They're so flipping cuttee!!!! And nooo not at all! I love slow progressions 😃 it allows you to enjoy the moment that much more. So cute how was carrying her and so sweet how he helped her with the pallu and realized he'd frightened her. At least he's trying to keep his anger in check now. I wonder what else Zoya is planning to do to get him to admit his feelings 😛

Loved it hun!
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Posted: 12 years ago
it's not at all iriitating
its awesome
i mean i reaally love your ff
and glad to see you back in your spirits
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Posted: 12 years ago
Thanks for the update... you are doing just fine... so much more to do.. 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
awww so cute continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
OMG! I hope you're okay! Things like heartbreak happen ...I always say ...well if not this one...then koi aur sai. Well there are plenty more ;) xD LOL
Back to the update! Well updates ...I missed the last two due to the busy schedule at work and the fact that my life is sooo muddled up right now! -.-
Anyways! LOL Loved the last two chapters! Absolutely amazing...their relationship is progressing slowly ...but I think it's fine ...I mean in reality it takes time to accept a person to their entirety. Chapter 31 was just spectacular ...exactly the way I wanted and chapter 32 was also perfect. The way Asad is worried for her and angry too ...but he is more angry with himself ...because he's not getting the acceptance from her. The one he craves for...Amazing! Loved them! Continue soon. I hope you feel better as well.
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Posted: 12 years ago
yaar how can you be so merciless? how can u write such a short part n end it in the middle again. don't do this not fair wid us. cont sooon. congrats on da launch of ur software.
Love.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Nope. I am not irritated at all! In fact I can't remember the last time I read such enjoyable stuff as this drawn-out jungle romance. 😆 One thing I have to give you credit for is the creativity of your romamtic scenes! Right from the beginning with the various ways you created romance using those handcuffs and now using Zoya's ankle, her sari, and so on. 😆 You really are a talented writer! 😉
I'm sorry for commenting after so long but I hope this makes up for it as I knwo you looovee long comments! ;)
Let me start with a couple parts back ...I LOVED AsYa teasing each other and Asad flirting! OMG, I didn't think it was possible! 😆 Loving Zoya's determination that she wants him to admit his feelings! And she's right...like he cant just keep kissing her and expecting that to be enough! Dude needs to verbally express 😉
And the last couple parts, I absolutely loved Asad's drawn out anger..tooo hottt Hahah sorry for fangirling but really, I love Asad when he's lion-like 😉
The dori scene and now the recent thing you did with the sari ..once again, kudos to you for being soo creative all the time. You know thank god I read like five parts all at once, otherwise I would get really impatient and desperate for updates with the small chaps you give us. Don't worry, as long as you keep updating this frequently, I am not complaining! 😉
And oh, you mentioned something about heartache in the last chap. Is everything alright?
Edited by xxDaydreameRxx - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: irock321

OMG! I hope you're okay! Things like heartbreak happen ...I always say ...well if not this one...then koi aur sai. Well there are plenty more ;) xD LOL

Back to the update! Well updates ...I missed the last two due to the busy schedule at work and the fact that my life is sooo muddled up right now! -.-
Anyways! LOL Loved the last two chapters! Absolutely amazing...their relationship is progressing slowly ...but I think it's fine ...I mean in reality it takes time to accept a person to their entirety. Chapter 31 was just spectacular ...exactly the way I wanted and chapter 32 was also perfect. The way Asad is worried for her and angry too ...but he is more angry with himself ...because he's not getting the acceptance from her. The one he craves for...Amazing! Loved them! Continue soon. I hope you feel better as well.



Haha true, there are plenty more so I'm good (: Life muddled up?? That doesn't sound good at all! Hope all's okay (: Yeah thank god you got what I'm trying to do haha, I mean they like each other and all, but accepting each other is a lot more than just loving each other (:
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Rarepearl

yaar how can you be so merciless? how can u write such a short part n end it in the middle again. don't do this not fair wid us. cont sooon. congrats on da launch of ur software.

Love.



Haha thank you!! (: Well I can't really update frequently and give long updates as well haha so I just chose updating frequently instead :p At least it'll keep everyone on their toes hahaha.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: xxDaydreameRxx

Nope. I am not irritated at all! In fact I can't remember the last time I read such enjoyable stuff as this drawn-out jungle romance. 😆 One thing I have to give you credit for is the creativity of your romamtic scenes! Right from the beginning with the various ways you created romance using those handcuffs and now using Zoya's ankle, her sari, and so on. 😆 You really are a talented writer! 😉

I'm sorry for commenting after so long but I hope this makes up for it as I knwo you looovee long comments! ;)
Let me start with a couple parts back ...I LOVED AsYa teasing each other and Asad flirting! OMG, I didn't think it was possible! 😆 Loving Zoya's determination that she wants him to admit his feelings! And she's right...like he cant just keep kissing her and expecting that to be enough! Dude needs to verbally express 😉
And the last couple parts, I absolutely loved Asad's drawn out anger..tooo hottt Hahah sorry for fangirling but really, I love Asad when he's lion-like 😉
The dori scene and now the recent thing you did with the sari ..once again, kudos to you for being soo creative all the time. You know thank god I read like five parts all at once, otherwise I would get really impatient and desperate for updates with the small chaps you give us. Don't worry, as long as you keep updating this frequently, I am not complaining! 😉
And oh, you mentioned something about heartache in the last chap. Is everything alright?



Haha yesss!! I do love long comments, I mean who wouldn't? (: Glad you like all those scenes I conjured up hahaha I spend a lot of my free time thinking of what new things I can do with Asad and Zoya :p And yup, actually both of them can't just kiss and be attracted to each other but not make any sense of it! That's not how it works haha. So I'll eventually make them make sense of it :p And don't worry about it, I'll be okay. All this is just part and parcel of life I guess! I'll have to take it in my stride (: Thanks for the concern though! I do appreciate it (:

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