FF: Mangalpur Madness #2 - last part on pg 41 - Page 35

It was so beautiful Pretty lady (: 👏 ⭐️

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Originally posted by: nisha150

hey was jst gng through and found dis FF and as i m vry fond of mangalpur FF's i tought to read it and i finished it reading it in 2days...it was realllyy awesum FF ...u r very good writer👏👏...all prts were amazing i never felt dat it was boring😃😃...asya were veryy sweet ...❤️❤️❤️
and wen i read d last prt i was lyk y did u end it soo soonn😭😭😭...if u continued it still in mangalpur also it used be nt boring at all bcoz magalpur and asya bth together are superbb⭐️⭐️⭐️...!!

Aw!! 2 days?? That's really quite a feat because the word document itself is 52 pages long!! I'm really glad you enjoyed this story as much as you did, I sure loved writing it (:

Originally posted by: Asya-Rm

It was so beautiful Pretty lady (: 👏 ⭐️

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Haha aw <3 Thank you so much!! (:

Originally posted by: me2you

Goingreen ji, what to say...

Sorry yaar for not posting my comments earlier. Woh kya hai na, I had read most of the parts but then I saw a second thread too and I had missed out those parts...and trust, those were the best ones.

In fact, the whole Mangalpur romace started after that, in the jungle!

I loved it! I really really loved it! Usually, I give quite long comments by using lots of quotes from each part. Unfortunately, can't do that this time but would like to mention a few:

"Mrs Zoya Asad Ahmed Khan, ghar chale?" (I loved the way he said it. Pata nahin yeh when he will say this in the actual show)

She was sure she'd just heard the most beautiful statement in the world. (Nice, very nice! Romantic, sweet and indeed a very beautiful statement) 😳

"Kiss me," Zoya whispered (Totally unexpected! Did not see this one coming. Naughty and bold Zoya, but hey someone had to take the initiative) 😳😉

"Accha? You mean just like how you're staring at me now?" (Zoya looking at Mr. Khan's bare back...where the hell am I??? Oh yes, I was with him in my own dream world...) ☺️😆

Its sad that the story has ended 😔 I would have loved to read more and more, but you know what they: all good things come to and end.

I absolutely love your style of writing. Yes, I admit, longer updates are always nice but since your updates are very frequent, I have no complaints whatsoever! 😊

Thank you sooo much! 🤗

Hahaha MM is my own personal favourite work, holds very close to my heart (: I'm really very glad you enjoyed it as much as you did haha. And chota chota updates keep everyone on the edge of their seats you see :p