FF: Web of Lies - COMPLETED on p80

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Puneet

@AsYa_fan

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#301

Wow I loved this part!! It was so good!! I really hate the Malak guy😡 But in all this was an awesome update!!! Can't wait for the next part!

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Linsie

@Linsie

Trailblazer

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#302

Thank you so much for the update...

Just love the story so much...❤️ asya moments are just amazing and
mind blowing their fight especially... ❤️ i find asad very cute...☺️ and how zoya calm him down... just love that...☺️❤️

waiting for next update

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Mahima

@Mahima_13

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#303

I had been eagerly waiting for it

For so long

And yup it met my expectations

Did u do some hacking course or something?

You have really gud knowledge of stuff

Fabulous job by you

AsYa scenes were great

Malak and Dev are so weird

P.s. now i really wish that Zoya is a computer geek (a hacker) in QH

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Barayah

@irock321

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#304

OMG Love it! Amazing chapter! Finally Zoya is using her brain! Now hopefully whatever Malak is upto she better catch him red-handed soon!

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sheilasandhu

@sheilasandhu

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#305

OMG that was AWESOME...

Superb writing👍🏼

👏

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webuser7

@webuser7

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#306

Awesome update as usual! Love how possessive Asad is for Zoya. I like how Zoya gets in between the two testosterone-high men but pushes Asad away. You only do that with someone you are close to.

Asad's "Nothing will keep me away from Ms. Farooqui, not a security guard, not all the electronics in the world and most certainly not you." was just awesome!

The whole K-7 gang appears sleazy. Don't know what Malak is playing at. He appears to be fond of Zoya but is getting her into some big trouble. Why? Guess we have to wait for the story to unfold further! What's physically wrong with him? Does he need a kidney transplant, hence doing something wrong to make money? Or is he gonna suffer from appendicitis or gall bladder infection? Gosh, more suspense!! Love it!

Loved Asad and Zoya bickering about "tree bark and liquid protein" and Asad's "If I'm grumpy, it's because you're driving me crazy, not because of my healthy diet."

Asad is so jealous!! He snorts. "So Surita's cow eyes are bad but Malak's wounded puppy dog expression is okay?" 😆

I am hooked to this FF. 👏 👏

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A.Hajnal

@A.Hajnal

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#307

That was an Awe-some up-date...!!!!! 😲 I love how Asad with Zoya there everytime she comes to the office and goes from the office...Just like a perfect "boyfriend"... LOL

Ahh, That MALAK...he first he said that Asad could hit her and then he was trying to say that Asad keeps her as a prisoner...🤬 That man has NO sense of danger...he invited "Sher" to tear him a part...and if The "Sherni" wasnt there, Asad would have tear Malak a part, limb by limb...and enjoyed it...I would have enjoyed it too, just as much as him...🤣 lol

Loved the fact that It was Zoya who took that step that eliminated the space between her and Asad...that shows that Zoya trust him...and the victorious look Asad gave to Malak...feeling smug and all that...🤪 Man, I wish I could smirk and say Malak "Ha-Ha..." on his face too...😈 LOL

I LOVE the way he inquiries others about her safety...He wont even correct That old man who somehow said that he was her boyfrind, he Does wants some short of claim on her...😳 Loved how he said that "No One, one one can keep his Ms. Farooqui away from him, not a security guard, not all the electronics in the world and most certainly not Malak...Oh, That adorably territorial and possessive Man...🤗

All the technical info that you give us, makes me want to try to learn about these stuff...pretty interesting, and not to forget very usefull...😃

Haha, with her geek-talk Zoya impressed Asad very much...But this is just the start, he needs to know more to realize just how much his woman is intelligent...😊

That Dev is an other man who provokes the Sher...But at least now Zoya know how that Something is really wrong with Dev...That she needs to find out what is Dev trying to do, that she needs to keep her eyes open when it comes to him...she needs to get in her "Jahan-pana s Bond girl" mood...😆

The only person I like from Malaks office is Surita...she manages to bring the territorial possessive Sherni that Zoya is...🤪

Ooo,Hooo...looks like someone did beat the life out of Malak...🤣 I love that in every up-date some of his bones are broken... lol But that makes me think that whoever is doing that wants "something" from him and for that "something" he is going to use Zoya...But its good that Asad is there for her, he wont let anything happen to her...even though he just thinks Malak as someone who wants to take Zoya away form him and someone wont mind have a romantic relationship with her...and that is what is making him act as an over-protective and possessive man...Its still Good...because he knows something is wrong with Malak...that he somehow can sense danger...thats why he wants all that weird equipments in the office so he knows that she is somehow safe...

Love the way he said "You are here in my office, drinking my soda and trying my patience. I should be your focus." 🤣 Oh, God...That man needs her to give him all the attention...always...😆

The cute fight in the end was way to adorably cute for words... and The ending was perfect...Zoya sitting and thinking about how ilogical and complicated men are...So Zoya-ish thing to do...🤣 lol

Edited by A.Hajnal - 12 years ago