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countingstarz

@countingstarz

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#141

A very original and interesting concept , loving it so far but I dread the arrival of Tanveer and that Malak guy gives me the creeps. Man Asad is such an ass I hope she doesn't forgive him too easily !

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rutu83

@rutu83

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#142

this is so good...pls continue soon

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Alveena12

@Alveena12

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#143

great update, Asad needs to learn to control his anger

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Barayah

@irock321

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#144

Poor Zoya man! Hate Malak and Asad was a bit of an ass today! xD LOL Anyways loved this update!! Amazing!!!

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Basilisk

@Basilisk

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#145

OMG just came across your story!!

You're such an amazing writer!!

Can you pls add me to the pm list?

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Lakshmi

@Chipmunks.

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#146

Asad' s temper is increasing day by day and it is not good. He'll snap at Zoya and hurt her like now. He have to be calm.
Malek continusly asking for her codes seems suspicious. I hope he is not a bad guy here because whatever may between him and Asad, he is Zoya's friend. If he back stabs her then I dont know how Zoya will handle that.
It was an amaing update. Thank you for PM 😊

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webuser7

@webuser7

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#147

Once again, amazing writing! You have a flair and a passion for writing and it shows. Waiting to see the shadiness unfold at Zoya's office. Malak asking about her codes is very fishy. I m hooked!

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Tanvi

@KulfiBai

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#148

Oh, God, Asad's anger -___- Great update, Paly 😊 I love where this is going and that Dev guys seems suspicious 😲 My poor Zoya bb 😭

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ALISHA ZEN

@LuvUAsYa

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#149

res!!

il surely b back by d evening dea... :)

OMG!! MAN HOOOW CAN U WRITE SOOO WELLL???

IT WS SERIOUSSLYY AWWWSMMM!!!

i reallly don hv words to xplain howww PERFECT IT WS!!!! 👏

LOVED d way asad cared 4 zoyaa...

bt i ws sad at d same point vn i read asad shouting at zoyaa sooo badlyy...

verryy nicelly ritten dea ...

tnnxxx alot 4 d PM!!

PLEEAEASEEE pleeease updt it noooww pleeeaach or atleast gv us a promo or precap!!!

pleeeaaach!!

Edited by LuvUAsYa - 12 years ago

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jazsidhu

@jazsidhu

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#150

Aww tis is just so nice...really awesome...totally luv it...
Hw could malik demand fr zoya codes...they r hers only. hw could asad shout at zoya when he was the one who keep it wit him...thx fr the pm n please pm me fr the next update...please continue soon n eagerly wIting fr the next part...