FF: Web of Lies - COMPLETED on p80 - Page 14

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Posted: 12 years ago
Asad...Asad...Asad...whats wrong with this man...why is always so ready to shout on her...Agar esa hi raha toh Zoya will start to think of leaving his home...he better do say more then sorry to her...cant wait for the next up-date...and pllzzz up-date soon...😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
Great update. Wonder how Asad will make up to Zoya.
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Posted: 12 years ago
omg! where did it go?!

suspense is rising, update again soon!
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice yr..i jat want zoya should get to knw abt malak& his team intensions soon...& asad..protect her...nice one i mst say..thnks 4 d pm

pari
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: xxDaydreameRxx

Asad is abusive.

And Zoya is stuck in this abusive relationship where he will lay his life down for her, protect her from the world, but still not respect her. In fact, he himself at this point is the exact thing that she is most in danger from.
... It reminded me of similar instances in the show but you know despite what Asad used to say to Zoya, she would alway forgive him in a second and we never really got to see a full-out redemption

I TOTALLY agree with you. Please remember where we are in the show at this time. This is just after Dilshad was nearly killed by the shooter so Asad is very angry and hyper-sensitive. Zoya is his partner but not really his friend. Tanveer hasn't entered the show so Asad doesn't have his "Backwards Cupid" to show him Zoya's real worth.
I'm trying to stay true to the tone of the show. I hope you'll enjoy the rest of the story. Thank you so much for leaving such detailed feedback!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome story, you write so well, I do not like this Malak guy, something is not right about him, I really hope he will not hurt Zoe, anyway Asad is Asad, being really a jerk,hopefully he will say sorry to her..
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Posted: 12 years ago
I read this three times I still can't get over the fact that the file was with him! Please update soon! :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
Me equals blown away. I was so freaking pleased with Akdu. He was being so protective an in a calm way too! The way he cared for her safety in his manner. The whole Sven of him kicking the door and being pleased and then introducing himself as the property owner was amazinggg! I loved it! And omg Zoya is so cute. The Akdu comment, trying to keep Asad away from other women's eyes. Just perfect. She's realized something is up between Asad and Malak and I hope she doesn't get stuck between them. Who am I kidding? She already is! Lol but I love how she calmt tries to stop the Cold War. AMAZING how she's suspecting Malak. I do not like that man and not only because he is comin between my otp but because he just gives off creepy vibes! Everyone in that office does... I hope Mr. Khan can protect his Zoya!

Alright Asad just pissed me off in the end. Typical him. Ugh. HE BLEW UP FOR NO REASON. And if that was Malaks anger being taken off on her- I'm double pissed. When will he learn?! PLEASE UPDATE SOON! Sunday right? (: I loved the chapter and now Sunday can't come fast enough!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Totally loved it
I read it in my working hours lol
Just couldn't help myself. Its my luck I didn't get into trouble as I was going every few minutes to finish your update
Loved it
I was stalking it like crazy
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow really nice!!!! Update soon!!!!!!!!!!!

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