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..juhi..

@..juhi..

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#121

brilliant update...asad ne file khud hi rakkhi thi aur bhul gaya😡

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xxDaydreameRxx

@xxDaydreameRxx

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#122

Asad is abusive.

And Zoya is stuck in this abusive relationship where he will lay his life down for her, protect her from the world, but still not respect her. In fact, he himself at this point is the exact thing that she is most in danger from.

Honestly, this chapter was BANG ON! I enjoyed the first half thoroughly - Asad punching and kicking the door was ROFL 🤣 and like I said before - I adore his steely protectiveness! But then the second half had me really intrigued. It reminded me of similar instances in the show but you know despite what Asad used to say to Zoya, she would alway forgive him in a second and we never really got to see a full-out redemption and he is sorta a changed man now anyways. This time, I would love to see Zoya give him a hard time and for him to learn a good hard lesson!

This Malak guy is getting fishier and fishier but even then I like his presence - he is important for Asad's realization. Loved these lines:

"If he has a problem with you then he's the one who needs to change."

Your writing was flawless as usual and this chapter was extremely well done! 👏

Edited by xxDaydreameRxx - 12 years ago

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Anjali

@AnjuRish

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#123

asad jumps t gun the lion is at it again ...now lady james bond to fire fight and rescue

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_Nabeela_

@_Nabeela_

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#124

i love it

please update it soon

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Mahima

@Mahima_13

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#125

This part was awesome

Dev and Malak were fishy

Loved the protective Asad

Zoya was definately rocking... They way she slipped out abt Asad's body building sites was so cute

Asad scolded Zoya

Oh no

Lets see wats next

Thx for the pm

Update asap

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CrazyBilli

@CrazyBilli

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#126

And offcourse Asad now deserves a tight SLAP from Zoya!!!😛

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Linsie

@Linsie

Trailblazer

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#127

super update... so much emo... there.. nice update soon

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krati

@krati5

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#128

lo kar lo gal... ASAD😡...

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Andrea

@DreA

Stunner

Posted: 12 years ago

#129

Great update!!

Asad is such an ASS!!!

Eagerly awaiting the next chapter!

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Neha

@Asyalover

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#130

W*F...is Asad's problem why does he always i mean everytime he speaks so rudely to Zoya ...srsly he needs to change that attitude of his...thanks 4 pm awesome update...cont soon