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rajnid68

@rajnid68

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#151

atleast her computer knowledge is being put to use..

brilliantly written..with never a dull moment..

love it if u cld pm..

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DMGFan-2b-not2b

@DMGFan-2b-not2b

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#152

Whats with Asad? Actually whats with all the men in poor Zoya's life? She really choses them well, doesn't she?

One is a crook, trying to obviously hack into client websites illegally and using Zoya to do the dirty work for him. I hope the repeated request for her codes has triggered off alarms in Zoya's head.

And the other is impetuous, foolish Mr Khan. Why is he so willing to jump on her all the time? I hope Zoya doesn't forgive him easily.

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Nazz1992

@Nazz1992

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#153

Again a fabulous update! I love the jealous and insecure Asad and Zoya's personality. This update really define the story and the plot. One thing, I really like about your writing is that in one single chapter so many things happens. Your strenght is how you meticulously define the time frame of your stories. It helps the readers to perfectly understand the context. I think you are extremely talented and it shows with your writing! Thank you for the pm and I am impatiently waiting for the next update!!!

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kiki

@-waitingforyou-

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#154

awesome update !
wonder what asad's gonna do next...

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PalyGirl

@PalyGirl

Explorer

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#155

Originally posted by: teddyyy
Alright Asad just pissed me off in the end. Typical him. Ugh. HE BLEW UP FOR NO REASON. And if that was Malaks anger being taken off on her- I'm double pissed. When will he learn?! PLEASE UPDATE SOON! Sunday right? (: I loved the chapter and now Sunday can't come fast enough!

I'm sorry but I won't have an update until next Friday. LIFE has gotten in the way and really messed up my writing time. Things will remain hectic for the next two week. I hope to have at least weekly updates but I cannot make any promises.

Thank you for your wonderful feedback! I promise I'll work on this story. It just won't be as fast as I'd like to put out the new chapters.

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Mahima

@Mahima_13

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#156

Originally posted by: PalyGirl

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I'm sorry but I won't have an update until next Friday. LIFE has gotten in the way and really messed up my writing time. Things will remain hectic for the next two week. I hope to have at least weekly updates but I cannot make any promises.</font>

<font color="#660000" size="3">Thank you for your wonderful feedback! I promise I'll work on this story. It just won't be as fast as I'd like to put out the new chapters.</font>

Friday... That's far

I'll toh die waiting

But I know it will be worth the wait

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Mahi Singh

@Kaya13

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#157

Amazing yaar..ur writing is superb...plz update faster. U have creativity, storyline and elegance and charm packed in this story..waiting to read more!

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xxDaydreameRxx

@xxDaydreameRxx

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#158

Originally posted by: PalyGirl

I TOTALLY agree with you. Please remember where we are in the show at this time. This is just after Dilshad was nearly killed by the shooter so Asad is very angry and hyper-sensitive. Zoya is his partner but not really his friend. Tanveer hasn't entered the show so Asad doesn't have his "Backwards Cupid" to show him Zoya's real worth.

I'm trying to stay true to the tone of the show. I hope you'll enjoy the rest of the story. Thank you so much for leaving such detailed feedback!

Paly

You're right Paly..in fact I was myself going to mention that if this story was taking place now it would have been sorta out of character because Asad has changed a lot with time, but yes if we were in that time period - this is exactly what he was and I'm glad you are giving us a fresh story and going about his redemption in a different way :) Tanveer definitely over-complicated things and to be honest, she is a very typical Indian Television villain who just plots and create unnecessary misunderstandings between the main leads..For me the plus point of the show always was that the real hurdles in their love story were Asad and Zoya themselves and I always wanted to see how they overcome their own flaws for the sake of love! ;) So yes thank you for this billo-rani free, refreshing FF of yours! 🤗

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amri123

@amri123

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#159

hey

awesome update

the chapter turned out great

it's so typical of Asad to get angry and blame Zoya for his problems without hearing her out

and he really said some hurtful things

and it definitely didn't help that his entire office was privy to his outburst

but knowing Zoya,

she'll just forgive him in the end

i really hope he realizes her worth before its too late

continue soon and thanks for the PM😊

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irene

@rennie

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#160

brilliant update...asad is just so dam quick to jump to conclusions...why is he giving zoya all the more reasons to go with malak especially since he is having badd feeling about their intentions towards zoya...