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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: AdorableTrouble

And Pallo is BACK.

Not a moment when you aren't hooked once you start.

Each action, each emotion. Beautifully done! Simply amazing.

Poor girl, my heart goes out to her! Makes me wonder sometimes, is he right for her ?

Now that you said you're outta hibernation, I can expectmore works, right ? Like MANY more ?



You can expect a few more. Got exams coming up again. This was just a product of acute insomnia! And I feel the same sometimes, does the man actually deserve her?
I think not. But I guess we'll have to stick to the M&B guidelines. 😆

Originally posted by: Evaindahouse

OMG

Firstly, welcome back!!

As everyone else is saying, you have definitely not lost your touch!!

I just loved the whole thing!! I read it thrice!! And the title is just apt!!
I hope you write more on Asad and Zoya, would love to come back and read more!!!



I'll defo be writing more if they don't ruin the couple even before they're together. Am glad you liked it. And titles are my specialty I think. Call me vain but I frikkin' love my titles 😆

Originally posted by: princessjojo

That was so intense! And beautifully written! Would love a second part..



Glad you liked it dear.


Originally posted by: ash08

Pallavi - Ok, ok. Stop pouting. Pallo 🤗

Beautiful girl!! Very very intense and very very real.

Would it be too much of a trouble to ask u to pm me whenever u write? Even if it is, do it... 😆

And please continue this. Asad will remain thickheaded always!! He has to you see. 😆 4lions ka hero hai.

Ain't we happy exams are postponed?? hehehe...

Welcome back baby!! You rock!! 🤗



Ash!!!! 🤗 *squeezing ur lungs out*
PMs will defo be delivered. Platinum-ish invites 😉
True about Asad. Kevlar cranium. Kuch andar jata hi nahi.
And we're SUPER DUPER DUPER HAPPY that exams got postponed. But we'll study also. 😆


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Posted: 12 years ago
#42
ok i am not a fan of asad and zoya or the show .. but when you wrote some thing ...i had to read.. thanks for the pm... you are so great...lu v it.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#43
Hi Pallo,
It feel so nice to receive your PM. I had not even some across your any other FF / OS in the recent past after GHSP. Welcome back and yes, it is so nice to read your post. This forbidden attraction between the two is heartwrenching. HOw will they live apart after their first kiss which drew their entire souls into one.
From the outset, it lloks like he know taht TAnnu is pregnant with someone elses baby. Then why can't he look out for that sin person and get her married to him and the baby will its own father asgod damn father?
Please continue soon.
Jaya
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Posted: 12 years ago
#44
beautiful.
brilliant.
the angst just carries me away.
dreamy.
soulful.
you have sharpened your wordcrafting.
perfection.
👏

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Posted: 12 years ago
#45
wow..its intense. Are you going to continue?? please please do.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#46
Beautiful.
Your writing is brilliant! The os was amazing of course, but the writing blew me away!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#47
Want a second part,plllzzz!!!!😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
#48
*Dancing...nd jumping on my bed*

Oh my my...this is..every..inch of zoya nd Asad..I was yearning for..!!!!
Zoya's sarcasm tipped wid dat cute anger, Asad's passion...oh my my..!!! I cant wait for more..!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#49
Jhallo my kid bro very well written...this is sooo like zoya and asad
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Posted: 12 years ago
#50
and back with a bang! awesome awesome awesome awesome! :)

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