~Yearn~ ||AsYa OS|| - Page 4

Originally posted by: Zees-Dbn

Palloo di!!!!

Fantastic...you are back with a bang! U still got your mojo! LOL😛 .

U reminded me why you were one of my favourite FF writers.👏

Wonderful, please write more on Asad and Zoya😉

Priti

xxx

You know it's really nice to see familiar faces here! 🤗
And am glad you liked the OS. Will defo try writing more.

Originally posted by: Arya1991

One thing I must say.

You.
Have.
Not.
Lost
Touch.
With.
Writing.
Beautifully.

It was beautiful.

It didn't make me cry.
It didn't make me blush.
It didn't make me react outwardly. At all.
It just made me yearn.
It made me crave for a chance.
A chance for Asad and Zoya.
It made me wish for love.

That is the power of a beautifully written story.
And.
You, my friend, do it every single time.

Welcome back to I-F!
I'm hoping for more such beautiful stories from you in the near future!

I really do love you people! You know how to make someone feel good bout themselves. *storm of kisses your way*

Originally posted by: AsyaManic

dis end here?

For now, Yes.
If I feel Asad redeems himself in the show...I'll get down to writing more.

Soft Kitty

OMG

That was so intense! And beautifully written! Would love a second part..

Pallavi - Ok, ok. Stop pouting. Pallo 🤗

Beautiful girl!! Very very intense and very very real.

Would it be too much of a trouble to ask u to pm me whenever u write? Even if it is, do it... 😆

And please continue this. Asad will remain thickheaded always!! He has to you see. 😆 4lions ka hero hai.

Ain't we happy exams are postponed?? hehehe...

Welcome back baby!! You rock!! 🤗

And Pallo is BACK.

Not a moment when you aren't hooked once you start.

Each action, each emotion. Beautifully done! Simply amazing.

Poor girl, my heart goes out to her! Makes me wonder sometimes, is he right for her ?

Now that you said you're outta hibernation, I can expectmore works, right ? Like MANY more ?

Beautifully written! Glad to have you back :D

Originally posted by: Kishmish

Hey ... Welcome back from hibernation ...

Thank God to see you active again ...

This was too good ... this couple is too cute and so intense ...

Loved the way you have captured their desire for each other ...

If only Asad was not so stupid not to see the actual truth behind

the stone eyed Billo Rani ... 😕

Thanks Pallo ... please continue ...

Asad isn't exactly stupid. He is judgmental. Period.
As long as you got a dupatta over ur head you're the embodiment of all things righteous. Jean clad limbs = Hello there! I'm speed post from the Devil.
Glad you liked it 🤗

Originally posted by: krati5

🤗welcome back...its so good to hear from you... nd must say back with a bang... the best thing about OS...cit gives d correct name to asad... Mr Asad Chicken Khan... this guy seariously needs some tons of courage

He is that. And many things more. I'm so itching to make a post on his 10002838748968 names. 😆

Originally posted by: ravkd

That was absolutely beautiful, thank you for the pm. cannot wait to read more of your writing soon :)

Glad you liked it dear! 🤗

Originally posted by: -Yaariyan-

OMG it was awesome awesome <3 just loved reading it and the write up was great 👍🏼

please continue soon

I love your username!😉
And glad u enjoyed it. 🤗

Originally posted by: coolfire

I love angst, and this was angsty with a capital A!!

Me too! Love angst. 😆
I guess it showed.

Originally posted by: soho19

Damn woman, wherever you came back, whenever, for whatever, thank the Holy Lord that you did ... I was in withdrawal ... don't vanish like that. Held all your pizazz, panache, and more. Brilliant. Felt you through and through. No criticism, never where you're concerned. Welcome back, chica :)

I missed you all too.
I'm gonna vanish again. But I'll leave enough stuff before I do 🤗

Originally posted by: Rozy77

hey pallo

so good to have u back

awesome, beautiful os

lovedd it

please write more, i always enjoy ur work

take care

thanks for the pm

Hey! U still using pink fonts!
Missed you! ❤️
Glad you liked it.

Originally posted by: Rarepearl

Oh God dis was FABULOUS!! u're an awesomw writer. dis os literally made yearn for a chance for AsYa to happen. keep up da good work dear.

Yearn being the functional word 😆
Glad you liked it 😳

Originally posted by: -Dee-

Pallo, you are the only reason I might read about an OS of a couple I don't watch on television. ;-)

Thats such a huge compliment!🤗 *storm of kisses your way*

Originally posted by: dumas

awesome os please one more part you can't leave it their loved the kiss thanks for the pm glad you are back thanks for the pm

Thanks sweetie!
Glad you liked it.

Originally posted by: pinkpearlz

Pallo! Is this you?! Missed your writing! And what comeback.
This piece left me yearning for more. Seriously, very beautifully written.
felt for them, but more so for Zoya.
Hope you will be writing more.

Yup it's me! In all my worthless punk bling. 😆
I hope I'll be writing more too.
I missed you. 🤗

Originally posted by: A.Hajnal

Wow...😲 that was beautiful...😊 Hope you will be writing more soon...😊

Thanks dear.
I'll try to write something soon

Originally posted by: e_enigma

Soft Kitty

Warm Kitty

Little ball of fur.

Happy kitty

Sleepy kitty

Purr, purr..purr.

<3 Gosh. This was outstanding!

Are you planning on continuing this?

*I did an overlap for the soft kitty*
I hope to continue it. But for now, it's just an OS.