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Nikki

@Nikki_C

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#51

AHHH i was super excited when i received your PM Pallo, and your return definitely did not disappoint😳👏

Loved the OS and i really hope that you will continue to write tiny tid bits whenever time permits and your creative juices are active and flowing😆

I adore your writing style and I wanna see your writing more often on this forum😛

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TheLastCarnival

@TheLastCarnival

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#52

Originally posted by: Barbie3143
ok i am not a fan of asad and zoya or the show .. but when you wrote some thing ...i had to read.. thanks for the pm... you are so great...lu v it.

Am so glad you did! 🤗

Originally posted by: deejagi
Hi Pallo,

It feel so nice to receive your PM. I had not even some across your any other FF / OS in the recent past after GHSP. Welcome back and yes, it is so nice to read your post. This forbidden attraction between the two is heartwrenching. HOw will they live apart after their first kiss which drew their entire souls into one.

From the outset, it lloks like he know taht TAnnu is pregnant with someone elses baby. Then why can't he look out for that sin person and get her married to him and the baby will its own father asgod damn father?

Please continue soon.

Jaya

Hey Jaya!
It's been long yup. I wrote some FFs for Arnav-Khushi...But I didn't know if you were following the show so I didn't send out the pms.
And as for the father-issue...It's been shown in the show that Imran will not have Tanveer. I just twisted around that a bit and wrote the OS with the thought that Tanveer tells Asad that the father ain't accepting and she'll be a social disgrace blah blah blah.
Ofcourse no such thing has happened yet. (Thank God! 😆)
Am glad you read this. It feels nice to be in touch again! 🤗

Originally posted by: pink.lotus
beautiful.
brilliant.
the angst just carries me away.
dreamy.
soulful.
you have sharpened your wordcrafting.
perfection.
👏

Am glad you liked it. And super glad that you spotted the improvement 🤗

Originally posted by: viya.mallik4eva
wow..its intense. Are you going to continue?? please please do.

Gonna try to continue if I find the time. Glad you liked it 🤗

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TheLastCarnival

@TheLastCarnival

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#53

Originally posted by: Nikki_C
AHHH i was super excited when i received your PM Pallo, and your return definitely did not disappoint😳👏
Loved the OS and i really hope that you will continue to write tiny tid bits whenever time permits and your creative juices are active and flowing😆
I adore your writing style and I wanna see your writing more often on this forum😛

Tid-Bits defintely.
Am trying to stick to OSs cause I have a very bad track record in regularity! 😆 Don't wanna bite off more than I can chew.
And I'll be haunting this forum! 😆
Glad you liked it 🤗

Originally posted by: bookadict303
and back with a bang! awesome awesome awesome awesome! :)

🤗 And am super duper glad!

Originally posted by: vivacious_gurl
Jhallo my kid bro very well written...this is sooo like zoya and asad

Gou Di!
🤗
Tried to keep it within the character sketch. 😆 Asad was easy enough. With his legendary thick-headedness. 😉

Originally posted by: shona_sanju
*Dancing...nd jumping on my bed*

Oh my my...this is..every..inch of zoya nd Asad..I was yearning for..!!!!
Zoya's sarcasm tipped wid dat cute anger, Asad's passion...oh my my..!!! I cant wait for more..!!!

And glad you enjoyed it.
Sarcasm is easy 😆 You should meet me.

Originally posted by: ..-AsYa-..
Want a second part,plllzzz!!!!😳

Hopefully I'll get around to writing a second part.
PS- I love your siggy. The Katherine one!

Originally posted by: whoops
Beautiful.
Your writing is brilliant! The os was amazing of course, but the writing blew me away!

Thanks 😳
Glad you liked it. 🤗

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SOWMYA

@sowmy18

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#54

tht was awesome!u should write more and more!

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Kshweta

@Kshweta

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#55

thanks for the pm. nice os. liked it

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Nutcase

@dreamymaya

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#56

welcome back dear...the yearning was described very beautifully and poetically! sigh!

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crazzychips

@crazzychips

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#57

wow now that was awesome
you should write more on asya
i loved your works on arhi in ipk forum .you write like wonderful no wonder why you are one of my favorite ff writers
glad you are out of hybernation :)

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Anzie

@Anzie

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#58

That was breathtaking! :') Loved it!

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--Nargis--

@--Nargis--

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#59

Pallo...🤗 I loved her quirky sense of humor... And the sarcasm, what to say?!?!😃

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xxDaydreameRxx

@xxDaydreameRxx

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#60

OMG. This. Was. Beautiful. Beyond. Words.

I've ready many great OS's but this one is definitely one of the best I've ever come across! It was written so flawlessly - just the right words, emotions, everything! My especially favorite part was when he entered through the window..and the name part was like OMG! Lol sorry for my non-stop squeaking but I just loved this so much.. Your writing makes me yearn for more so please do write more on these two and do pm me if u can when you do! <3