~Yearn~ ||AsYa OS|| - Page 3

Originally posted by: -Fizzi-

This was beautiful man! I'm hoping for a second part. BTW, I love Shelly Cooper too. :P Soft Kitty is my favorite. <3

Originally posted by: -Devanshi-

res!!!

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This was such a beautiful OS!! The sarcasm was there but it was the sarcasm that didn't make you smile, it was the sarcasm meant to hurt and boy did you show it well!!!

I just loved how Zoya hit back at Asad for everything that he said because seriously, there was no way he could justify himself. Even if his best friend is pregnant. Nuh-uh. Not happening.

The chemistry was quite evident throughout and I loved how she said his name. Is this the first time she says his name?

"Am here cause," he began again with difficulty, "I can't stay away. Cause even though you're all wrong for me, this feels so right. Being with you."

This was prize winner. i keep reading it again and again and again and go all dreamy eyed That sentence is there at the climax of every love story but when and how it is said is the most important part and in this it was just PERFECT.

So yes, I refuse to believe that you have lost your touch. Infact just made me your bigger fan...😃