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soni_md

@soni_md

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Posted: 12 years ago

#21

Damn woman, wherever you came back, whenever, for whatever, thank the Holy Lord that you did ... I was in withdrawal ... don't vanish like that. Held all your pizazz, panache, and more. Brilliant. Felt you through and through. No criticism, never where you're concerned. Welcome back, chica :)

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__blossom__

@__blossom__

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#22

that was beautiful!👏

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Asya0910

@Asya0910

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+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#23

That was beautiful. Wonderful. Amazing. And more... Please continue... Pm and buddy me please

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prpk525

@prpk525

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#24

Welcome back dear. Missed you. Read the os. Loved it. :)

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ritz21

@ritz21

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Posted: 12 years ago

#25

Awsumn update ...
Loved it...
So are u back was it just for the snap of a moment...
I miss ur writings...

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dumas

@dumas

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#26

awesome os please one more part you can't leave it their loved the kiss thanks for the pm glad you are back thanks for the pm

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@flowers4u

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#27

a very beautiful os... totally what mr khan would do

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Bushra

@cmileyfreaky

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+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#28

and you're back with a bang! :D

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arhilover55

@arhilover55

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+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#29

Aww loved it!
Thanks for the pm.

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TheLastCarnival

@TheLastCarnival

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#30

Originally posted by: -Fizzi-
This was beautiful man! I'm hoping for a second part. BTW, I love Shelly Cooper too. :P Soft Kitty is my favorite. <3

I hope I do write a continuation. But that wholly depends on how much more of Asad's thickheadedness can I take! 😆
Glad you liked it.
And *territorial roar* SHELLY COOPER's mine! 😆

Originally posted by: -Devanshi-
res!!!
EDIT
This was such a beautiful OS!! The sarcasm was there but it was the sarcasm that didn't make you smile, it was the sarcasm meant to hurt and boy did you show it well!!!
I just loved how Zoya hit back at Asad for everything that he said because seriously, there was no way he could justify himself. Even if his best friend is pregnant. Nuh-uh. Not happening.

The chemistry was quite evident throughout and I loved how she said his name. Is this the first time she says his name?

"Am here cause," he began again with difficulty, "I can't stay away. Cause even though you're all wrong for me, this feels so right. Being with you."

This was prize winner. i keep reading it again and again and again and go all dreamy eyed That sentence is there at the climax of every love story but when and how it is said is the most important part and in this it was just PERFECT.

So yes, I refuse to believe that you have lost your touch. Infact just made me your bigger fan...😃

Yup *nodding head vigorously*
First time she says his name. 😆
I'm glad you enjoyed it. I was pretty worried that maybe it's not good enough. But ...*sending storm of kisses ur way*