Date Par Jaana Padha Tho? OS - Page 6

Loved it. I love how you portray them, so true to their characters. I can very well imagine them behaving the same way post marriage.

I feel the letter should have been for Asad.. Anwar should have requested him to take Zoya out on a date.. situation would have been more funny and awkward if he had asked her for a date without telling her that he is doing it as per Jiju's request..

Originally posted by: hsvs

Sangeeta, this is very sweet! Asad and Zoya are very much true to their character. I can visualize such a scene... well!

In the actual serial, all we will get is Tanveer natak - so for us to get our daily dose of AsYa, we will need this!😃

So please start writing more of these in increasing frequency! 😊

Originally posted by: Sana70

It's Awesome 👏 I wish you joined 4 lions as a writer in writing team so we gets more n more great Asya moments 👍🏼 😊

Originally posted by: webuser7

Very nice, Bheegi. Today's episode was disappointing. Tomorrow looks like its gonna get worse. So, enjoyed reading some halke moments between AsYa in your OS. Umm, bruschetta! Yummy!!

Can I be presumptuous to give you some future ideas:

• Honeymoon Pe Jaana Pade Toh?
• Shopping Ke Liye Jaana Pade Toh?
• Picnic Pe Jaana Pade Toh?
• Gaadi Beech Raaste Band Pade Toh?
• Jungle Mein Kho Gaye Toh?
• Movie Dekhne Jaana Pade Toh?
• Game night - Game Khelna Pade Toh?
• Office Party Jaana Pade Toh?
• Asad sick, Zoya nursing him: Akdu Patient / Hot Nurse Ko Jhelna Pade Toh?
• Zoya helping him with some tech issue at work. : Office Office Khelna Pade Toh?

You've probably thought of most of it already!

😆 😆

Originally posted by: salekh1

This is by far the best OS written by you

Your an exceptionally awesome writer

Im amazed!

Espicially the jealous Asad,OMG please do include more jealous Asad scenes in your future OS, itll make them all the better

AMAAZINGGG writing

Please pm me if posiblle

Cant wait for the next part😊😊😊

Originally posted by: UK_VS

Please join the QH creative team.

Originally posted by: Mr_Mrs.KSG

Hey, I,ve read all of your Hona To,s😆. And truly they are totally amazing. Kuch toh aaj kal accha mil raha hai . I hav totally lost hopes on CV's, and not to forget Asad too.Jab dekho billi ki hi side leta hai. And coming to your post. The most amazing line of your this OS was He was capable of messing up a perfect compliment with his words; his eyes never lied unlike his words. That is soo true. I am glad that you brought it up. I would totally luv it if u cont soon. Do you mind Pm'ing me plz. Or else i wouldnt know when u updated. Plz do cont asap. And i would luv to read a jealous Asad, something like Jealous Hogaya Tho. And Zoya was totally hilarious. The best parts were,

I think Mr. Khan, at least hotel waalon ko tho lagna chaahiye na ki hum newly married hain. Agar main aage aage chali tho aisa lagega we have been married for 10 or 15 years, haina, and Well, aapki tarah nahin hoon ki logon ko peet peet kar exercise karoon!"

and "Aur Mr. Khan. I burn most of my calories with my laughter. Aap jaante hai na main kitna hansti hoon. Meri aadhi calories tho waise hi burn ho jaati hain. Aap bhi koshish kariye kabhie Mr. Khan. Start laughing more, phir logon ko peetne ki zaroorat nahin padhegi." It totally cracked me up. 👏

Originally posted by: ..vidhi..

it was awesome di!!!!
loved the cute bickering sessions...waiting for the next one...continue very soon!!!
vese u are posting this on Forum32 na?i want them to learn something from this :-P

awwie I loved it !! Who says romance is all about being physical and saying mushy thing !!