Date Par Jaana Padha Tho? OS - Page 4

Awesome..every time ur os will be very nice..

This was so sweet and romantic.Im waiting for the next one.

Date Par Jaana Padha Tho? OS

Excellent writing! When TV serials are in 'dragging' mode, these FFs are only solace.

Keep writing.

That was a totally fabulous OS! Amazing!!! I was hopelessly waiting for this update!!! Love your series!! Can't wait for the next one!!! :D

Please join the QH creative team.

Hey, I,ve read all of your Hona To,s😆. And truly they are totally amazing. Kuch toh aaj kal accha mil raha hai . I hav totally lost hopes on CV's, and not to forget Asad too.Jab dekho billi ki hi side leta hai. And coming to your post. The most amazing line of your this OS was He was capable of messing up a perfect compliment with his words; his eyes never lied unlike his words. That is soo true. I am glad that you brought it up. I would totally luv it if u cont soon. Do you mind Pm'ing me plz. Or else i wouldnt know when u updated. Plz do cont asap. And i would luv to read a jealous Asad, something like Jealous Hogaya Tho. And Zoya was totally hilarious. The best parts were,

and "Aur Mr. Khan. I burn most of my calories with my laughter. Aap jaante hai na main kitna hansti hoon. Meri aadhi calories tho waise hi burn ho jaati hain. Aap bhi koshish kariye kabhie Mr. Khan. Start laughing more, phir logon ko peetne ki zaroorat nahin padhegi." It totally cracked me up. 👏

hehe great OS dear I love ur ...Os sequences Jana pada toh...karna pada toh...toh toh n alll...

This was so cute, sweet, thoughtful, mesmerizing and pure joy to read.

wow it was amazing👏.. i loved the whole part.😃
plz pm me for the next part😉