Darmiyan: A cross border Love story

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey I am Jerry. I know I should be updating my first FF "Har kisi ko mukammal jahan nahi milta" at regular intervals but this idea has been bothering me for quite a long time now. Therefore, I have decided to start a new ff as well. Hope you like it.
Darmiyan: A cross border love-story

Their love brought them close but others' hatred tore them apart.

Main Characters:

Zoya Farooq: Daughter of an Officer of Pakistan Army

Capt. Asad Ahmed Khan: Indian Army

Lahore, Pakistan

"I am so proud of my little girl. Now that your education has finished apply for ISSB. Join the Army like all of us have always wanted you to."
Brigadier Farooq beamed at his daughter at her convocation ceremony.

"I will Baba but first I want you to fulfill a wish of mine."
Zoya replied.
"Anything you say beta."
Her father looked at her affectionately and said.
"I want to go to India for sight-seeing with my friends. All of them are going. Please, please, please let me go and see the Taj-mahal for real."
F: "Okay."
Z: "Really? I love you, I love you, I love you so much."

Pune, India:
A jeep stopped in front of a black gate. A soldier clad in khaki uniform moved forward and opened the front door. A handsome young man of about 25 came out. The camouflage coupled with the sun-glasses he was wearing made him look like Adonis himself has descended to Earth.
The soldier who had earlier opened the door for him saluted him. He picked up his mobile as it buzzed in his pocket. A guy spoke at the other end
"Kaptaan Saab Kidher ghayab hain?"
"Nowhere yaar. Bus Fojaan Mojaan nai na. We have to work unlike you."
"Yah right. Tu to bilkul bhool e gya e apnay doston ko. Acha kher sun, I have called everyone. Tu Agra aja. Dehradun janay se pehle mil ke jaeen."
"Fine. I will call you later to update you about my plan."

Part 1: Pg 4
Edited by Jaren93. - 12 years ago

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Posted: 12 years ago
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count me in😃 a very different plot. sounds really interesting. continue soonish
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey nice start cont soon ...
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Thank you for the pm and i am very interested in this ff, it seems like it is going to be very intriguing, please continue soon
please pm me when you update
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Posted: 12 years ago
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oye this sounds interesting.. have to give it to u.. u always come up wid such different ideas.. plz continue soon n pm me darling.. god bless..:)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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gr8.continue soon and pm me
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Do continue this AND Har Kisi Ko Mukkamal Jahaan Nahi Milta! (You did today, but update regularly). Where do you get such unique and awesome ideas??
I love both your FFs. Now just update soon Jerry.
Thanks for the pm!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hey Jerry, sry my like button isn't working. but I love dis ff. its soo good, i'm already hooked to it. plz tell one thing, is it a sad ending story or not? plz add me to diss ff of urs too.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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You know something like this was going within my brain since a lot many days. I must tell you Veer zara is one of my favorite movie.. And, I just love this love story where in two people from two different nations fall in love and the difficulties they have to overcome to unite.. That was a must watch movie.. And, also I just love Army officers.. Yeah.. They have such an intriguing personalities.. God, they are really adorable.. And, since a long time I was thinking what if Asad is shown as an Army officer so alike his personality.. I so wanted to read something related to this plot. When I received the PM , the title itself made me loose my control and led me over here... I m really very happy that you started this story.. And, m in for it.. Waiting for the saga to begun.. Do continue soon!!!

Dee

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