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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey all you beautiful people! 😃
So I'm here with another OS.
Its a short one! I actually just had an idea so I noted it down.
Here is the link to my most recent OS : Tum Hi Ho
Anyways, hope you enjoy it 😊 :


Chaahat
Everyone was dancing to the music in the living room of the Khan Mansion. Asad's ammi had called in a choreographer for the Sangeet of her son and bhahu. The song, Khuda Jaane was playing while Asad and Zoya practiced the steps that they were just taught.
Asad Twirled her into his arms and swayed back and forth with her. Dilshad and Najma were so happy to see that Asad and Zoya were finally not fighting and actually enjoying each other's presence. They sure did enjoy it as they couldn't get their eyes off each other. All of a sudden something interrupted the beautiful moments. Someone stood at the door with a bag in their hand. Everyone turned to see who it was.
Zoya: Aapi?
She ran to go and hug her but her Aapi moved back. Zoya stopped in confusion.
Zoya: Whats wrong?
Zoya's Aapi: Whats wrong? Zoya Do you even know what's going on in your life?
Zoya: Of course I do.
Zoya's Aapi: So is it not important to tell your aapi anything?
Zoya: But Aapi, I-
Zoya's Aapi: Zoya, you're going to get married and you didn't think about telling me?
Zoya: Aapi, everything happened so fast that -
Zoya's Aapi: That you didn't get the chance to tell me? Zoya, I can't believe you could do such a thing.
Zoya: the reason I couldn't tell you is because everything is fake Aapi!
Zoya's Aapi: FAKE? Zoya what the h*ll. Nikkah is not a game Zoya! You're not a kid. You should at least understand this much!
Zoya was silent as she looked down. She didn't want to look at her aapi while she was mad at her.
Asad was watching this a bit awkwardly, but finally decided to jump in!
Asad: Actually, it's not her fault. So please don't yell at her
Zoya and her aapi both looked up at him
Zoya's Aapi: So is it your fault?
Asad: Look, the situation was difficult and this was the only option we had!
Zoya's Aapi: Really? The only option? You tell me Asad is this really all just a game? Are you really just doing this because of the sittuation you were put it.
Zoya crossed her fingers hoping he would say something like no it's not a game. But obviously Mr. Khan being Mr.Khan, kept quiet and looked down.
Zoya's Aapi: Thats what I thought. Zoya, your leaving this house, right now!
Zoya: Wait! Aapi listen!
Zoya's Aapi didn't listen to her one bit. Instead she took her wrist and began to pull her towards the door. Zoya had tears n her eyes. She looked back at Asad. Her face clearly said 'Help me.' Asad closed his fist tight and Finally spoke.
Asad: RUKIYE!
Zoya's Aapi and Zoya both stopped and turned to look at Asad.
Asad: You can't take Ms. Farooqui!
Zoya's Aapi: Why not? She's my family. Why can't I take her?
Asad: Because she's mine. Only Mine.
A tear fell from Zoya's eyes. Her Aapi's grip slowly loosened on Zoya's wrist.
Zoya's Aapi: I thought this Nikhah was fake?
Asad: The nikhah may be fake, but the love is real.
Zoya's Aapi finally let go of Zoya's wrist with defeat. A happy defeat.
Felling that her Aapi let go of her wrist, Zoya ran and hugged Asad.
Main toh bas teri chahat mein
Chahoon rehna sada
Main toh bas teri qurbat mein
Chahoon rehna sada
Saya bhi tera mein
Hone na doon juda..
Maine theh kar liya
Tere ishq pe..
Tere waqt pe..
Bas haq hai ik mera
Teri rooh pe tere jism pe
Bas haq hai ik mera

Song used: Chaahat
Movie: Blood Money


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risingsea101 thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome
It was beautifully written
Great job love :)
Akilla thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
#3
bohot khubsoorat thi, would have loved it more had you pulled the dialogue and described the dance scene more but tum jaanti ho ki tum bohot good writer ho and that your writing is fantastic anyway... :P

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Posted: 12 years ago
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This was just fantastic, i absolutely love it.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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D'awww!!!! That was so fricken sweet! Loved it! Perfect!! I'm so hyped for the next episode!!! I swear if Asad doesn't say it ...Imma shit bricks! -.- xD LOOL
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hahaha nc 1 bt aisa kuch b ni hone wala haiserial me..hamare Mr Khan itni jaldi admit ni karne wale ki unhe unki Musibat se pyar hogaya hai :P
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow
That was Awesome! 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice os dear
thanx fr d pm😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Beautiful Lovely OS..
Thnx for PM...
Mariam..

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