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bheegi

@bheegi

Stunner

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Posted: 12 years ago

#71

Originally posted by: CutielovesChocs
Hayye main marr jaaawaannn!!!

DI! This was AMAZING. So was the first part. Hayyyeee, I can just imagine this happening, you've written it so beautifully! Excuse me, I can't find enough words to describe this mindblowing piece of work, since you've transported me to AsYa land! 😆

Please do continue JALDI JALDIII! :D

-Raina

Hi Raina...where have you been girl? Busy with studies?

Yes, AsYaland is a wonderful place...😳

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bheegi

@bheegi

Stunner

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Posted: 12 years ago

#72

Originally posted by: divi2013
That was super good. It felt like I am watching a future episode of QH.

Let's hope so...I am sure the writers of the show will do even a better job😊

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bheegi

@bheegi

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#73

Originally posted by: Laila2009
Loved it. Totally brilliant. These OS are wonderful as stand alone stories but work so well together to create a short story. What I love about your short stories is you keep true to the characters. So many of the short stories and fan fictions deviate so much I no longer feel I am reading about Asad and Zoya anymore. I absolutely love the comic element and can honestly picture the characters doing what you write.

My guess is Zoya and Asad did not do the horizontal tango and that is yet to come (PG rated style of of course)...it would be sweet to read Zoya taking care of Asad's needs and Asad taking her out somewhere. I would love for Asad to eventually find out the truth about the saree and what his darling Tanveer did. I hope that one day he does appreciate Zoya.

Thanks Laila...no they haven't crossed that bridge yet...that will take time. I am going to keep it as snap shots and hopefully get to the point till they have kids...let's see how it goes😃

Date will be a great idea...i will incorporate that for sure

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webuser7

@webuser7

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#74

Originally posted by: bheegi

Yeah, I plan on going all the way to the 'batchche ho Gaye tho' part😆

Even if they don't get married yet, we can always dream of these scenes.

LOL! Can't wait! 😆

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Sharon

@NazarLaayeNaa

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#75

loved it.waiting for the update.😊

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-RohitMaxwell-

@-RohitMaxwell-

Trailblazer

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#76

it was awesome. i'm just loving this OS series 👍🏼

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Laila Banu

@Laila2009

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#77

I feel there is so much the writers can give us about Zoya and Asad - their childhood and the challenges they faced. We've never had Asad or Zoya talk about what it was like without having a father and for Zoya, not having a mother. How did affect them both? How did they decide on their respective careers, who are their friends.

When did Zoya realize she was interested or had feelings for Asad? We never really saw the turning point in the show - I feel this is the weakest part of the story. Did it happen at Mangalpur? Or did she realize it after Tanveer showed up? Or after she saw Asad break after finding out about his father? Did the vulnerable side of him suddenly have an impact on her or was it the valentine dance? We don't really know...