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life4me

@life4me

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#61

Beautiful os. You are a amazing writer.

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Pori

@Pori

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#62

Awww

Asya are shoo cute

Omg! perfect scenes.. loved how Asad couldn't stay in the office no moree

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Ani

@DesiiiiGirllll

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#63

Earings aaki aamanat hai aur earings wali bhi😳
Hahahah! I luvd this! Continue it soon ❤️

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braich_gal

@braich_gal

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#64

🤣...this just keeps getting better and better with each OS...am loving it!!!! Awesome!!! I can so totally imagine Asad and Zoya like this in the show!!

Edited by braich_gal - 12 years ago

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Sona

@sparikh

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#65

very cute OS; u got nice series going her, girl!

This Asad is showing emotions...imagine that. :)

-Sona

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Curiousmind

@Curiousmind

Navigator

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#66

Great series and wonderful OS. love reading everything you write cause there is magic in your hand.

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Niharikapriya10

@Niharikapriya10

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#67

👏👏...cho cute di...iss tho series is beautiful...❤️plz continue...if possible PM me😊

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CutielovesChocs

@CutielovesChocs

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#68

Hayye main marr jaaawaannn!!!

DI! This was AMAZING. So was the first part. Hayyyeee, I can just imagine this happening, you've written it so beautifully! Excuse me, I can't find enough words to describe this mindblowing piece of work, since you've transported me to AsYa land! 😆

Please do continue JALDI JALDIII! :D

-Raina

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divi2013

@divi2013

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#69

That was super good. It felt like I am watching a future episode of QH.

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Laila Banu

@Laila2009

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#70

Loved it. Totally brilliant. These OS are wonderful as stand alone stories but work so well together to create a short story. What I love about your short stories is you keep true to the characters. So many of the short stories and fan fictions deviate so much I no longer feel I am reading about Asad and Zoya anymore. I absolutely love the comic element and can honestly picture the characters doing what you write.

My guess is Zoya and Asad did not do the horizontal tango and that is yet to come (PG rated style of of course)...it would be sweet to read Zoya taking care of Asad's needs and Asad taking her out somewhere. I would love for Asad to eventually find out the truth about the saree and what his darling Tanveer did. I hope that one day he does appreciate Zoya.

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