Room Share Karna Padha Tho?OS - Page 6

Hi Sangeeta, nicely written piece once again...

Originally posted by: _vineeta_

Hi Sangeeta, nicely written piece once again...

I loved the office part(in and coming back) and closet part the most, even though I don't want her to find that earring so fast. Would love to see his hesitation in deciding on how to put it on, when he watches her getting ready in front of mirror😛

I can see Najma teasing him and Dilshaad freeing herself from his responsibilities pushing them to each other..

Waiting for next part already, do it fast please. Zoya will surely get the real guy out of him soon by constant teasing😳

It was such a pleasant OS!!! amazing writing!!

Lol smiley and blushy Asad. I like! It's amazing how all these versions of Asad are actually coming to life (sort of) on our screens these days!

Loved the story Sangeeta. You are one of my favourite writers on the forum. I love how you never take away from Zoe's character. There are many who water down Zoe's character and make her the simpering and shy wife but you have found the balance between her outgoing nature and her inability to handle her intense feelings for Asad completely.

Can I request for a bacha ho gaya tho chapter? I want to see how AsYa handle being parents...LOL!

Originally posted by: delena90

Lol smiley and blushy Asad. I like! It's amazing how all these versions of Asad are actually coming to life (sort of) on our screens these days!

Loved the story Sangeeta. You are one of my favourite writers on the forum. I love how you never take away from Zoe's character. There are many who water down Zoe's character and make her the simpering and shy wife but you have found the balance between her outgoing nature and her inability to handle her intense feelings for Asad completely.

Can I request for a bacha ho gaya tho chapter? I want to see how AsYa handle being parents...LOL!

Wow, Sangeeta! This was delightful... Your Ho gaya tho? series of OS's are simply brilliant. 👏

Originally posted by: bheegi

Thanks Pri...I love Zoya's fiery character so will try to keep her the same. Asad can mellow down with time😆

Yes, I have a series planned here...next is sari..then maybe honeymoon...then ehem them...then kids😃

Lol I can totally imagine Asad getting down and dirty and then turning around and saying "Ammi ke khatir" 😳

😆

Originally posted by: hsvs

Wow, Sangeeta! This was delightful... Your Ho gaya tho? series of OS's are simply brilliant. 👏

Confession - the past few nights, I have had to wake up for some reason or the other. I actually sneak into IF (on phone) to see if you have posted something! 😆

The characters are spot on! We can actually visualize the chars in the show spouting these lines. It would be really nice if the writers also used such sequences instead of focussing on darling BR!

Originally posted by: delena90

Lol I can totally imagine Asad getting down and dirty and then turning around and saying "Ammi ke khatir" 😳

😆

Originally posted by: bheegi

Oh no...didn't mean to disturb your work flow😊

Yeah, akdu as a lot of self control😆