AN ASYA SS: CONFESSION ON HOLD(16+) completed last part5#pg56(new15/8) - Page 2

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Posted: 12 years ago
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OMG what should I say beautiful? awesome? wonderful?
I seriously loved this
so sweet and romantic at the same time
oh how I wish this would happen in Qubool Hai
but don't know when Asad will change 😆
Dilshu you are brilliant 😉
you rock
thank you so much for sharing this
please write more
I would love to read more ASYA OS written by you
Edited by MalikaRose - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#12

Originally posted by: darkangel93

WHAT?!?!?!? asad SLEPT when his wife was in that sinful dress?!?!? GAWD, will that man NEVER learn?!?! 😆 LOVED it, dear!!!! very nice!!!

😆 this is Asad don't know when he will change
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Dilo mamma s v naughty!! simple neat n clean updt n loved it
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Posted: 12 years ago
#14

Originally posted by: MalikaRose

OMG what should I say beautiful? awesome? wonderful?

I seriously loved this

so sweet and romantic at the same time

oh how I wish this would happen in Qubool Hai

but don't know when Asad will change 😆

Dilshu you are brilliant 😉

you rock

thank you so much for sharing this

please write more

I would love to read more ASYA OS written by you

omg i m feeling very happy after reading ur comment !!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#15
wow... want more...please continue...night 2

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Posted: 12 years ago
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I will definetly try to continue this but i m not 100% sure whether to continue this or write a new one !
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: BlahBytes

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2" color="#0000ff">Above 18 only daal do subject line mein...bacche ghoomte hain yahaan...</font>



🤣 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
#18
hey...its hot and cute...☺️it will be awesome if they shot this OS😉beautifully written👏write more...and if possible send me PM whenever u written on AsYa,so that i may never miss ur AsYa OSs😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: BlahBytes

Above 18 only daal do subject line mein...bacche ghoomte hain yahaan...


🤣
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Posted: 12 years ago
#20

Originally posted by: sgksg3

omg i m feeling very happy after reading ur comment !!

well I was happy reading it 😊
what I liked about it that it was beautifully written and clean
I mean we could see something a bit like this happening in Qubool Hai
Also loved how you didn't change much of Asad's character
because while I was reading it I was picturing him doing that
As usual pagal Asad 😆
PS: I think you should finish this it's awesome
Edited by MalikaRose - 12 years ago

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