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nice ..pls do cont it soon..

Originally posted by: niharikapriya1

hey...its hot and cute...☺️it will be awesome if they shot this OS😉beautifully written👏write more...and if possible send me PM whenever u written on AsYa,so that i may never miss ur AsYa OSs😃

oh thanx for liking it ..and i will surely pm u when i will write the next os

Originally posted by: MalikaRose

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well I was happy reading it 😊

what I liked about it that it was beautifully written and clean

I mean we could see something a bit like this happening in Qubool Hai

Also loved how you didn't change much of Asad's character

because while I was reading it I was picturing him doing that

As usual pagal Asad 😆

<div>PS: I think you should finish this it's awesome

oh thanx for ur comments and liking my os ..but i wanna say to keep asad in the character was so difficult for me bcoz i m A KSGIAN ..and being ksgian i m a big fan of my lovuu dr.armaan ..i loved armaan and this asad is so different from armaan that made it difficult to put romantic scene ..but with armaan i was free to use even overdose of romance!
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.and i wanna ask whether i should finish it here only or i should continue with the next morning sequence !

Originally posted by: sgksg3

oh thanx for ur comments and liking my os ..but i wanna say to keep asad in the character was so difficult for me bcoz i m A KSGIAN ..and being ksgian i m a big fan of my lovuu dr.armaan ..i loved armaan and this asad is so different from armaan that made it difficult to put romantic scene ..but with armaan i was free to use even overdose of romance!
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.and i wanna ask whether i should finish it here only or i should continue with the next morning sequence !

Originally posted by: MalikaRose

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😆I think Asad himself as a character is a bit confusing so I get why it's hard

but maybe you could start it with how he is now as a character which you just didand slowly change his character

I mean hopefully in Qubool Hai he will change a bit 😉

I want to see what will happen next morning and Asad's reaction 😆

so please continue

oh thanx for ur advice ..i will try to update this soon !

Originally posted by: Marysaa

<font color="#ff3300">OMG superb !!!! I want a third SUHAAG RAAT lol</font>

third suhaag raat ?????????????????????

Simply amazing gat job. Please keep writing.

oooh, I LOVE IT!! please update soon and if you're sending PM's (or creating a list), please add me to it!

plz give us a part two n plz pm me ur nxt update😛