OS: 'I cant Marry Her' Part3 on Page8(last) - Page 4

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Posted: 12 years ago
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i'll kill u 4 de cliff hanger... Updt soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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thank u 4 the pm and i hope asad save zoya in tym ...updt soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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OH MY GOD NOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! WHY DID U STOP HERE?!?!?!?!?!? PLLLEEEAAASSSEEE continue soon!!!!! LOVED it!!! and thn a lot for the pm!! 🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
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oh no you can't stop here !! you need to update very soon please
it's an interesting story
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Hey just read this OS. Loved it. Can you please pm me whenever you continue next. Will be waiting for your update.

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Enchantress

Hey just read this OS. Loved it. Can you please pm me whenever you continue next. Will be waiting for your update.


Dee



I am just doing it now :D
Hopefully will be there in few minutes
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Asad was frustrated, came to Tanveer who was standing with Najma and Dilshad. He asked them to come along to the room "I cant Marry her, this Nikaah cant happen. Please Ammi Jaan, come along with Najma and Tanveer to the room." Tanveer got shocked to hear how Asad know that She is not Zoya but Tanveer, Dilshad and Najma passed shocked looks to each other. They both went inside the room.

Asad was really angry and asked Tanveer to take off the
Ghoonghat from her face.
Tanveer took off the Ghoonghat from her face, and Najma, Dilshad got shocked to see her. "Where is Zoya? Tanveer what are doing in Bride's dress." Dilshad questioned Tanveer who was scared now what to do next. "Tanveer, I didnot expect this from you! I got Zoya's message just now that I am not home. " Tanveer stared at Zoya angrily. Tanveer burst into tears, " Asad, I was told to do this. I just helped Zoya, she had some important work to do."

Asad took out his mobile once again and read out the message from Zoya again "MR.KHAN, I am not at home. I asked Tanveer to be at my place... And Please help I am trapped in the old factory near our house." Asad got shocked after reading the whole message he recieved from Zoya from his phone, it was 5 minute ago.. In anger he didnt read up the full message. He was now worried,scared that what will happen to Zoya. He just rushed out of the room, and running through the hall out of the house. Dilshad tried to ask the matter but he had left.

"Tanveer, Please go and change the dress. I think Asad went to bring Zoya. She must be in trouble and why did you let Zoya leave. And Namja please go and ask the guest that Nikaah will happen within a hour." Tanveer was angry as all her plans were being a flop, she nodded and went out from the backdoor to change her dress. She was burning from inside.

Asad's eyes were full of pain and fear of losing Zoya. He stopped his car by the factory, he saw flames of fire inside the house.. Windows were clearly showing the scenerio inside the factory. Asad ran toward the door and tried to open it but it was not opening. "ZOYAAA.." Asad shouted in Pain. But no response came. Asad became more worried, he banged the door and it feel off. His eyes were searching for Zoya but she was no where to be found. He shouted out her name in Pain. Zoya heard him calling her name but she was hurt and burnt and couldnt speak. She slowly moved infront of the pillars, to make Asad to see her, she was very weak she couldnt move anymore. Asad saw her, her forehead was covered of blood. Asad rushed to Zoya who was about to fall but Asad caught her in his arms and carried her to the door and went into the car. Zoya had fainted but was back in senses when Asad splitted some water on her face. Zoya hugged Asad. "Mr.Khan thank god you came. I thought I would have died." Asad held Zoya tightly by arm, angry " Why did you come here? If I was 1 minute late to arrive here, I would have lost you." Zoya was happy to hear that fromo Asad, she knew Asad cared,loved her. Zoya: "Mr.Khan someone played a dirty prank on me and called me here to saying they will answer my questions about my past and have kidnapped my dad. I couldnt help and just came here to see my dad and save him but someone then put fire all around the factory and I was trapped." Asad, get deep into thought about who could be the person who tried to kill Zoya. He was worried about Zoya but now they had to rush back to home for the Nikaah.

Asad and Zoya arrived back at the Khan Mansion, Zoya again got ready for the Nikaah. Everything was back to normal again! Everyone was happy except Tanveer, "My plans are not over Zoya! I will not leave you like this. I couldnt stop the Nikaah but your marriage will never be a success."
Edited by SuperStarQasim - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#39
Awesome Update...
Thank Allah that Asad reached on time & saved his Zoya...
Loved the Update...
Is this the LAST PART or will u continue it???
Mariam...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Khushi2187

Awesome Update...

Thank Allah that Asad reached on time & saved his Zoya...
Loved the Update...
Is this the LAST PART or will u continue it???
Mariam...



For Now Its The Last Part but you want me to continue i will do :D
Btw how long OS should be? 😆

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