OS: 'I cant Marry Her' Part3 on Page8(last)

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Zoya was in her beautiful bride dress,she was worried something was troubling her!Tanveer came to the room and came to Zoya, she smiled. "You are looking gorgeous Zoya, beautiful." Zoya smiled back and thanked her. She was still worried, Tanveer gave an evil smile. "Zoya whats troubling you, its your Nikaah tonight, anything wrong?" Zoya stood up and faced Tanveer, she took out her mobile and showed something to Tanveer. Zoya had tears in her eyes now, "What should I do, go and meet the person who knows my father who is kidnapped or stay here and happily ,and have my Nikaah.I cant tell anyone also the kidnappers strictly warned me, I heard my Dad screaming in Pain, I cant help"

Tanveer reacted as she was shocked to hear that, " Zoya now what to do? Only a hour is left for you Nikaah and this all? What do the kindappers want?" Zoya " They said they just want to meet me, they want to tell about my Dad and my mom's death. I dont know why they had to kidnap my Dad to tell me about this all which was my only aim to come to India." Tanveer comforted Zoya who was crying, "dont lose hope! I wish I could have helped." Something came into Zoya's mind, she turned to Tanveer. "Tanveer can you sit here in my place here , I will be back in 20 minutes.. Please dont say No. I really need your help." Tanveer was confused but then she nodded, Zoya thanked her.

Tanveer was now in the bride's dress, Zoya rushed out of the room from the backdoor. As Zoya left, Tanveer gave a evil smile "Poor Zoya, she dont know what is going to happen next to her." Tanveer looked into the mirror, "This had to be my day, I am the girl who will marry Asad not Zoya. Now no one can stop our Nikaah." As she said this, she turned down the Ghoonghat on her face. Zoya ran on the dark road, rushing to find the dad and answers to all her questions.


to be continued..


-part 2 on page 5
-part3 on page8 (last)
Edited by SuperStarQasim - 12 years ago

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Omg, you so have to continue this, pleaseee.
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Originally posted by: Manpreet23

Omg, you so have to continue this, pleaseee.



Surely I will because it will be practise for my english literature paper 😆 AsadZoya+Exams prep both in 1
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Posted: 12 years ago
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What The...?? 😲

Ahhh Tanu...😡 Nice start...Up-date soon...😊

I was thinking about something like this can happen...I mean "Zoya, going away" Part...bcause At least this time Zoya can't be the one to say "Qubool Nahi hai"...its getting old...so Or Asad will do something or Shadi will be stopped way before the Nikah day...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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like the start 👍🏼...quite interesting...plz do continue 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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oh my god!!!!!!!!!!!😡
i want to kill tanveer. i don't want asad misunderstanding and thinking that she ran away again.
please continue
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Lovely strt...
Hate tht Tannuu...
Waiting for next update...
PM me when u update...

Mariam...
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plz cont soon.cant wait anymoreee.
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allww waahh! App likihte bhi ho?? Update karoo! Jaldii 😃
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Originally posted by: MisHumptyDumpty

allww waahh! App likihte bhi ho?? Update karoo! Jaldii 😃


Haan HumptyDumpty 😆 I love writing but zyada time nahi milta :P

And thanks alot

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