OS: 'I cant Marry Her' Part3 on Page8(last) - Page 2

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Posted: 12 years ago
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OK good he'll say I cant marry her meaning tanveer u r gone
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Omg. You better continue. Please pm me when u update.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Please update soon and please PM me once you update :):):):):)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Thanks guys and surely yes
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Posted: 12 years ago
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This is really good... Plz cont soon :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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interesting..continue soon..😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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OMG!!!
Scary... Possible scenario... 😭
I won't be surprised if the CV's go down this track for twist ...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Najma knock on the door and entered in, Tanveer was sit on the bed with Ghoonghat covering her face. Najma thought she is Zoya, and went to her. "Mashallah, Zoya the dress is looking so beautiful. Bhai Jaan will lose his senses to see you in this dress." Najma got no response from Tanveer, she just noded. Najma found it weird that whats wrong with Zoya. "So you are nervous, only half an hour left for the Nikaah. I think Ammi is calling, now next I will come to take you down for the Nikaah." Najma went out, shut the door up. Najma: "Where is Tanveer? She promised to help me with preparation."

Zoya stood infront a huge old factory, she was really worried. She went inside the factory, through the big enterence door. She shouted for her Dad " Abu Jaan? Anyone there?" She moved some steps further , the factory was really dirty and it was scary. The lights were dim, Zoya was feeling scared. She got no response and it also seemed that there was no one over there, Zoya was disappointed " I think someone played a dirty joke on me, I should go back poor Tanveer must be worried now." As she turned back to leave, someone from outside shut the door up, Zoya rushed to it and tried to open it but it was too late, The door was blocked. Zoya was now trapped. "Allah Miyan, What to do now? Nikaah is to happen in few minutes and the Dulhan is trapped here. I should have never trusted those messages. Mr.Khan, please help." Zoya was now helpless.

Tanveer was really happy because her all plans were working, "In few more minutes Zoya will bid bye to this world." Najam came up to the room and asked Tanveer (she thought she is Zoya as
Ghoonghat was covering Tanveer's face."


Najma took Tanveer to the hall where all the guests were sitting and waiting for the Nikaah to happen. Dilshad came to Tanveer and hugged her. "Zoya now you are going to start a fresh life with Asad. I am proud to have a daughter in law like you."

Zoya could smell fire, she turned around and saw a the factory hall have caugh up with fire and is burning rapidly. The fire was spreading rapidly all across. Zoya was shocked.

to be continued

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Posted: 12 years ago
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HOW CAN YOU STOP THERE!? Please update sooon! Omg will Asad get there in time!?
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: mochhug

HOW CAN YOU STOP THERE!? Please update sooon! Omg will Asad get there in time!?


Will update the part 2 tonight 😛
Glad you are liking it

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