SS: There they lay l Part 3+ Note l Page 28 - Page 16

Gaaah another awesomme updatee! I'm smiling like an idiot in class while reading this! You have no idea how happy I am to hear that there's another part to this! Can't wait to read the next part so do continue soon and thanks for the pm :))

I'm glad that Asad and Zoya finally let out their feelings and showed how much they love each other. Will be waiting for the next part to see how they are going to react when Dilshad and Najma catch them in such a compromising position with the kitchen in a mess !!

aw what a kiss
cant wait for najma n dilshad opening the door n seeing the mess

I just Love it and waiting for the next part :)

Amazing part! 😃

🤣 I am just imagining... How will Dilshu mommy and tamatar react seeing the condition of kitchen...or AsYa! 😉

omg omg omg that was awesome...u write sooo well, awesome job👏

im waiting, im waiting, i waiting ...please update soon, your writing is amazing

OMG! this was superb dear. loved it. plz continue it soon n thanx for the pm.

O Freak! I cant wait till Dilshad and Najma see them and the kitchen in this state 😆

Originally posted by: supriya.ipkknd

O Freak! I cant wait till Dilshad and Najma see them and the kitchen in this state 😆

You are gonna torture us more! Aren't you! i'll have to wait for 1 more part now :(

And this was sooo Hawt *blushes hard*

Asad and his husky voice ☺️

You should think about writing romance novels in the future

Torture!🤔 Well, I don't know. Yet to figure out what I'm gonna write next.

Like this one. I had no plans to write so much gutter until I watched AsYa dream dance sequence video☺️ That mere video made my adrenaline rush up and I wrote this😳 I thought of only including a kiss but this part had more than this. AsYa are seriously driving me crazy and making me think... you know what😉

Romance novels?? Where did that come from?? Oh Jesus! This was a mere try. I tried to experiment with my brain cells. Novels!??? No ways, I think I better limit myself here. I have to make a career out of my dreams. These are just secondary. I write things as a hobby and only when my heart tells me to. I'm happy with this😛