SS: There they lay l Part 3+ Note l Page 28 - Page 15

Originally posted by: keshiya

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Saali Kamini!!

Dee, this was awesome yaar.

I never thought you would be writing something on the forum😲

Topper aur sports person toh tu hai hi and now a writer too😃

I'm so glad to read your work. Ab college mein tujhe ek naya naam dena padega😉

Darling, you're just great.👏 AMAZING!!!

Chal ab isse zyada tareef mujhse nahi hoti😆

And hey, baccha how are you feeling now?? Call ya message kar or I'll do that.

Your Pumpkin,

Dhwani😉

Alah Miyaan! What's wrong with you Pumpkin? Tu aur QH forum pe? When did that happen? Chal koi nai. We have another AsYa fan over here. I'm so glad to see you darling.

And what was that? When did you begin to swear. Classes aur college mein toh kabhi tujhe aise baat karte hue nahi suna.Haan well kabhi kabji karti hai tu but only when you're angry.

Wait a minute! Tu mujhse naraz hai??😲😭 Oh Lord!

Yes, I've been writing since a long time. Tujhe PMs bhi bhejti hu but you never come on IF. Four months se tujhe online nahi dekha

Topper!?? Aur tu kya hai re. Khud toh college mein first rank laake baithi hai and me at the third place😭 I swear agar wo ladka mujhse .15% zyada marks nahi lata na toh I would have at least come second in our college😭

Haan haan, aur kya expect karu tujhse main. You and tareef are like opposite poles of a magnet😆

Chal, I'll call you. Three weeks ki holiday mili hai. Why would I leave a chance of doing masti with my friends😉

Mind blowing story..i didn't want to stop reading. I was so involved in the story that my heart beat went faster..oh how much I wish there was more. P,z update soon.

Originally posted by: HoneySuckle

omg omg i wish this would happen!!!

I too but we know it can't happen in near future. AsYa dream dance sequence ke baad I have hopes. Let's see.

Thanks for reading

it is lovely .. waiting for next part

omg!

OMG

I saw ur pm and m like wow I got so excited to read it that I didn't even check other PMS what they were. I read this first thing on if today man loved it. It was mind blowing while reading it I made my mind m so rereading it.
Lol why did u stop there now u have to con soon plzzz plzzz plzz plzzz

I hope they will get caught lol I love when they get teased

wow...amzing man...it was freaking awsumm...thanxx for the pm

awesome!its hot!do continue asap!😳and dont forget to pm me!😃

Awesome part Diya...


Loved it... can't wait for next part