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canadiankudi

@canadiankudi

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#11

Very beautifully written!! Please don't stop here!! Write more...

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Hera Flames

@Flame.Of.Rose

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#12

Maahiii! *hugs* finally madam is up online! Welcome to the forums! Ahhh AsYa, my fav after AR! Love you for starting ur magic of fiction in this forum too! Now coming to OS, I simply want to bang my head somewhere! I don't understand whats wrong with Zoya's Mr. Khan, why he keep on pushing her buttons! I loved the way you described Asad's feeling towards all that he keeps on doing to hurt and keep away Zoya. Poor guy is full of insecurity!!! I loved ur OS... Hope to read more from you in this forum!

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Farhana

@risingsea101

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#13

Aww, that was nice

Loved it dear

Awesome job :)

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-RohitMaxwell-

@-RohitMaxwell-

Trailblazer

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#14

its totally amazing...

i want more parts please please

pls update soon. very lovely update

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Nim

@Rarepearl

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#15

really nice. I wish Asad never hurts her again by those words again.

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Himani

@Infinities

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: loveableangel
That was amazing please write more

Thanks fella 😃😳

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Himani

@Infinities

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: Gurmeet4Drashti
Hey ...
That was mindblowing !!

Thank youuu😳

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Himani

@Infinities

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: kandygrover
Very nice. Very well written.

Thank you for your appreciation 😳

Originally posted by: hiddenpearl
awesome :)

Thanks😊

Originally posted by: Irresistible.
You write beautifully love <3

Thanks sweety 😳

Originally posted by: kajen
Mahiii

Res Res Res lmao..am in Kekta mood aaj...will edit after my exans nuhahahaha..

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Aarttiii :*

Kekta matlab 😕

Okaaay will be waiting 🤗

Originally posted by: Aphrodite
You have written this so beautifully!! Do continue!
Asad is so mean to Zoya...poor Zoe..but I'm sure he will rectify his mistake :D...waiting eagerly for the next update.

Thank uuu dear 🤗 your appreciation means a lot

I have no plans of continuing as of now ...lets see 😳

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Himani

@Infinities

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: Surish

Thank youuu 🤗

Originally posted by: canadiankudi
Very beautifully written!! Please don't stop here!! Write more...

Heyyaa dear , thanks for the appreciation 😃😳

Actually I haven't thought of continuing it , Its an OS actually ...😊

Originally posted by: zan101
hey itz very nice...

Thanks 😊

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Himani

@Infinities

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: aditi061
Maahiii! *hugs* finally madam is up online! Welcome to the forums! Ahhh AsYa, my fav after AR! Love you for starting ur magic of fiction in this forum too! Now coming to OS, I simply want to bang my head somewhere! I don't understand whats wrong with Zoya's Mr. Khan, why he keep on pushing her buttons! I loved the way you described Asad's feeling towards all that he keeps on doing to hurt and keep away Zoya. Poor guy is full of insecurity!!! I loved ur OS... Hope to read more from you in this forum!

Aditiii 🤗

I too love AsYa , Started adoring them lately 😳 ...They are amazing !

I know ...IDK when will he confess his feelings ...😕

I hope our wishes are granted soon 😉

Thank you so very much for your beautiful comment sweety 😃😳

Glad to find a KriYaansh fan here😉