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---Nisha---

@---Nisha---

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+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#101

Originally posted by: mochhug
Yes love it :) Good for Zoya, standing up to Asad. Please continue soon :)

You liked it...I thought no one would like it coz it was kinda crappy. My head still hurts because I got a whopping 4 hours of sleep in 2 days. I got dizzy yesterday actually. I know thats bad.

I slept like 11 hours last night and still my head hurts...I still need more rest. So, I wrote this kinda bsing it...Sorry guys.

I am actually not happy with this part.

Edited by ---Nisha--- - 12 years ago

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Anjinie

@Anjinie

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#102

Loved Zoya it is gud that she is standing up to Asad

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shreya mehra

@shreya11mehra

Stunner

Posted: 12 years ago

#103

gud going zoe. ...dnt b soft towrds jahapanah...ye kabil h nh narmi k...torture him...as if he tortures u...

very nice post dear...gud luck fr ur xams

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ABI

@ABBY92

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#104

I like the fact that Zoya is showing Asad her frustration instead of pretending that everything is okay !! And she's right, Asad needs to accept her for who she is even though we know Zoya is willing to change a little if Asad changes too !!

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krati

@krati5

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#105

he he he... i cn just imagine asad's face aftr zoya's outburst...🤣

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Jassieg

@Jassieg

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#106

It's beautifully written. I wish to see some action in the next chapter..especially AsYa moments..plz update ASAP. Thanks.

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Homaira

@hummi16

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#107

Really nyc update xx luved it xx cnt w8 2 see wat happens nxt xxx plzzz upload soon xxx

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Barayah

@irock321

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#108

Amazing! Love this side of Zoya ...glad to see her like this again!! I want her to act like this in the show as well...rather than to mope around!

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Monica

@mochhug

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#109

Originally posted by: ---Nisha---

You liked it...I thought no one would like it coz it was kinda crappy. My head still hurts because I got a whopping 4 hours of sleep in 2 days. I got dizzy yesterday actually. I know thats bad.
I slept like 11 hours last night and still my head hurts...I still need more rest. So, I wrote this kinda bsing it...Sorry guys.
I am actually not happy with this part.

No its good :) i love that she's not being the submissive wife :) when the story is good the wroting comes to you automatically ;) trust me i though some of my posts were crap and people ended liking some of em better than my favourite ones haha

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Laiba

@-Laiba-

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#110

Lol i seriously LOVE Zoya xD waiting to see what will Asad reply as seriously whts wrong with him XD poor girl made so much effort to wear traditional clothes for him in the morning but he left so whose fault is it? Asads!!!!!anyways continue soon and do make it longer xD
Love, Laiba

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