AsYa SS - After the Darkest Hour - Page 21

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Originally posted by: salmeh.

Awww this was so beautiful and pure. Yours FF are the only ones which actually make me think KSG as Asad. And Najma's interaction with Asad was so emotional and real. I loved how you gave Najma a part to play coz Gul doesn't lol. Frankly, im not a good commentor bare so with so with this one.

You are amazing writer who knows how to catch and potray the emotions in front of the readers. Asad's characterization , I swareee no one can depict it better than you and I MEAN IT !

Keep up the good work^^

Originally posted by: penfriend28

love ur ff...ending was great...you have to write... more

Originally posted by: Sanaa629

Thank you soo much!! Hope the rest of the chapter was up to your expectations.. and hope Asad's plan didn't fail them..😆 Yeah.. I wish Asad realizes the truth as well.. but it's gonna take a LOT of time.. hence I write OSs and SSs while waiting for Asad to come to his senses.. 😆

Originally posted by: Chipmunks.

I must say you really bring out the emotions. While reading I could imagine it happening in front of my eyes. The hurt, the joy everything.
I really could imagine KSG as Asad. It was such a beautiful story. Do write more 🤗

Originally posted by: Sanaa629

Thank you loadzz..!!!

I'm sorry.. I just can't continue it.. it'll become a drag if I do and boring to read. The original plan was of three parts.. but then I realized I wanted to make AsYa relationship grow in the span of ten days.. hence four parts. 😆

Uhmm.. I'm not sure if I'll create another SS..for me it actually takes a lot to see a SS or FF through and I HAVE to see them through coz I hate leaving stuff incomplete..I prefer OSs... One piece of writing.. done and dusted..lolzz...But anyways.. let's see how QH inspires me..😆