AsYa SS - After the Darkest Hour - Page 22

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Posted: 12 years ago

Continue to keep me intrigued with your fantastic updates!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey ...
That was flawless ... :)
I read the whole SS in one go and I absolutely loveeed it !!! :D

Oh. Em. Geee !! Honestly i really didn't expect Asad to choose Tannu :O

The ten days that made them realize their feelings were actually sooo intense !!!

Ok !! And my favorite part was definitely the jealous Asad when he was actually counting seconds when Amir and Zoya were talking ;)

And even the part whenever Asad just can't digest the fact if seeing Zoe with someone else ... :P

The lighting part was amazing ... :)
Awwwie the way he slipped the note was just adorable ... ^___^

And yesss !!! The confession was just epic ... :-D
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Chotu_Babu




hahahaha... yeah... OS's are care free... no problm.. write OS's then but come bck wth ur new piece of writing... i juz love to read ur stories...😃

nd glad dat u hate pending stuff... thn try to complete ur pending OS.. "behind d closed door"... u paused at d pick point, yaar...
😭

EDITED : hey juz saw d siggie... superbbb.. 👍🏼




Heyyah.. sorry for the late reply.. Regarding BCD.. the response wasn't too good.. but I'll try my best 😊

Which siggie btw.. the one on this SS? It was a gift.. 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Gurmeet4Drashti

Hey ...
That was flawless ... :)
I read the whole SS in one go and I absolutely loveeed it !!! :D

Oh. Em. Geee !! Honestly i really didn't expect Asad to choose Tannu :O

The ten days that made them realize their feelings were actually sooo intense !!!

Ok !! And my favorite part was definitely the jealous Asad when he was actually counting seconds when Amir and Zoya were talking ;)

And even the part whenever Asad just can't digest the fact if seeing Zoe with someone else ... :P

The lighting part was amazing ... :)
Awwwie the way he slipped the note was just adorable ... ^___^

And yesss !!! The confession was just epic ... :-D



Heyyah! Sorry for the late reply..!! Thank you for the detailed comment.. it really did make my day..!!😃

I think I really loved the hypocritical yet jealous Asad as well..!! I wish he gets a chance to be jealous.. would be great to see how he would react..!!😆

Thank you sooo much once again!!!😃

Love,
Sanaa
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Posted: 12 years ago
My heart was pumping wildly.. God, Asad can make me jump into worlds creepiest conclusions.. For once I thought that mad man would get married to his best friend.. Select friendship over love.. But, then he'll never... Thank god.. It was a part of story as we see in some movies like we are sitting at the edge of the seat waiting to see what will happen next,, .. It had such effect on me.. For once when tannu with all her emotions was trying to get asad for her... I thought the game is over.. But then for once Asad used his heart and brain both at same time.. You know its necessary to use both your heart and brains.. whenever it is required... If you use your brain where heart is to be used.. You'll fall on your face and vice- versa too... So , I would just say I loved this update.. Was just stalking and I got such a fine chapter.. And a perfect beginning to their story.. Yeah it ain't the end.. You see tanveer will return soon.. She has to handle three people now you know.. Razia, Asad and zoya,...😆

Dee
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Posted: 12 years ago

OMG that was so beautifull
i love this
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Posted: 12 years ago
this was awesome
after last nights episode i was actually feeling really bad
i didn't knew what to think, but after reading this i'm feeling that therre is still hope
thank you dear for this lovely story

chipps
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Enchantress

My heart was pumping wildly.. God, Asad can make me jump into worlds creepiest conclusions.. For once I thought that mad man would get married to his best friend.. Select friendship over love.. But, then he'll never... Thank god.. It was a part of story as we see in some movies like we are sitting at the edge of the seat waiting to see what will happen next,, .. It had such effect on me.. For once when tannu with all her emotions was trying to get asad for her... I thought the game is over.. But then for once Asad used his heart and brain both at same time.. You know its necessary to use both your heart and brains.. whenever it is required... If you use your brain where heart is to be used.. You'll fall on your face and vice- versa too... So , I would just say I loved this update.. Was just stalking and I got such a fine chapter.. And a perfect beginning to their story.. Yeah it ain't the end.. You see tanveer will return soon.. She has to handle three people now you know.. Razia, Asad and zoya,...😆


Dee



Heyyahh.. Thank you soo much 😊

yeah.. Asad did use his heart and brain.. but I really hope he starts doing that in the show. For a hot shot business tycoon, this man has the IQ level of less than a 5 year old! *sigh* Anyway.. not going to boil my blood over stuff I can't control.. lol! 😆

And you're right. This is Asad and Zoya's beginning. But that's another story.. which I don't know if I'll tell.. lol! Let's see how I feel. At the moment.. the track isn't inspiring me for anything besides banging Asad's head against a wall in hope of him getting some brain..! *rolls eyes*

Thanks soo much once again!!

Love,
Sanaa
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: crazzychips

this was awesome
after last nights episode i was actually feeling really bad
i didn't knew what to think, but after reading this i'm feeling that therre is still hope
thank you dear for this lovely story

chipps



Awhh. Thank you for the lovely comment! 😊
Posted: 12 years ago
Awww d ending couldn't have been perfect than this

lovelyyy 😳
Edited by enrique - 12 years ago

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