AsYa SS - After the Darkest Hour - Page 23

Read this yesterday. Absolutely brilliant and beautiful story! One of the best I have read. Characters' turmoil was portrayed very well and all the little gestures like Asad adjusting coat collar, or passing a note under the door, getting the ring fitted made things more real, more poignant. And, I didn't think I would ever comment about Tanveer, but this Tanveer was way better than the psycho that we have in the show. I imagined Nisha's version of Tanveer and she could have gone through this. Amrapali's version would have stabbed Zoya in rage and then cackled.

Read this yesterday. Absolutely brilliant and beautiful story! One of the best I have read. Characters' turmoil was portrayed very well and all the little gestures like Asad adjusting coat collar, or passing a note under the door, getting the ring fitted made things more real, more poignant. And, I didn't think I would ever comment about Tanveer, but this Tanveer was way better than the psycho that we have in the show. I imagined Nisha's version of Tanveer and she could have gone through this. Amrapali's version would have stabbed Zoya in rage and then cackled. [/QUOTE

heyy.. thanks soo much! I try.. 😆

Amrapalli Tanveer is just plain evil! Pure evilness runs through her veins! As for Nisha's Tanveer.. I sort of found it easy to sympathize with her situation.. She was such a bechari.. 😆 Tanveer right now has got awhole new shade... You just want to kill her completely..!! I would have added more of Tanveer.. but I did mention that this was going to be an SS and I wanted to end it with AsYa just uniting..

Thanks loadz for this lovely comment! 😳

Love,
Sanaa

This story is so beautiful...I actually cried a little! X

Originally posted by: webuser7

Beautiful story!

Originally posted by: fatima30

This story is so beautiful...I actually cried a little! X

Thank you so much for this index--imagine I had only read a couple of your OS before! Just gone through the entire lot--give us more! Delightful reading!

This is just so awesome & beautiful. I loved reading this story & Asad Zoya are so true to their characters here!

AMAZING!!! It was just awesome!!!